I thought I heard you say, that day...
while with the preacher man.
"I'll love this girl with all my :heart: heart,
and in harm's way :bazooka: ...I'll stand.

No man, can ever share the joy...
I now hold in my soul,
I shouted out...to all the world...
"She's mine :love: ...to have and hold"

You said those things in the proudest way,
and you lead me to believe it was true.
if all these things, are indeed a fact,
why the hell, am I sitting here blue?

Please don't :nono: explain a thing to me
your actions speaks louder than words
you did everything, but step on my pride
all your dirt, was clearly heard.

I won't stoop down to the level you fell
and I won't let you lead me ...astray,
just gather all your belongings ...
and kindly ...be on your way.

I can't let you destroy, :bomb: what's left of my life,
so just go on, do as you choose.
I don't even care to mend what we had
but in the end...it's you who'll lose.

Wow, you dropped a bomb here. It's so sad when a situation gets so bad, that you don't want to even think about fixing it somehow, let alone doing the actual work. Expressed on point poet.

LOOK OUT NOW U REALLY DOING IT UP WHEWWWWWWWWWW!!!
REALLY LIKE DIS PIECE SIS.

I likes this...your pen is hot i see...nice drop flow on.....

U must have went thru alot...U alwayz kicking a brotha out the crib!

All I can do is clap my hands on this one. It is a very nice piece. Continue being a strong writer and we will continue being captive.

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All I can do is clap my hands on this one. It is a very nice piece. Continue being a strong writer and we will continue being captive.

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Hi oraiders11, it's a honor to read you again..good to see you active.
Thanks for the support on this piece, hope to see more of you:jump:

queentswana:
I could feel your every word and I know
you meant them when said them.
I too have wallked this path.
Nice write sista.

It appears that you and brotha Keita worked
things out. That is wonderful you 2 seem
to love each a lot. A poetic couple that's really nice.


Much luv

queentswana:
I could feel your every word and I know
you meant them when said them.
I too have wallked this path.
Nice write sista.

It appears that you and brotha Keita worked
things out. That is wonderful you 2 seem
to love each a lot. A poetic couple that's really nice.


Much luv

As we know for a fact, everyday ...ain't Sunday
thank you so much