Can't explain how I'm feeling
I don't know what to do
I know my heart feels empty
Because it's missing you

I try to smell the roses
But they just don't smell the same
Oh what I would give,
Just to call out your name

The stars aren't so pretty
The sun is not so bright
I'm seeing total darkness
Even when there is light

I need to have you near me
Closer to my heart
Without you in my life,
My whole world falls apart

I need you here,
Right now,
With me,
That's what I see
My heart can't take it,not no more
To be without thee
:love:

Miles away from you
not sure of what to do
Longing for your tender kiss
And those passionate words that I miss
Feelings that pull at the strings of my heart
Pulls even stronger when we are apart.
How I long to hold you in my arms
And keep you safe from all harm
May I make love to you with but a single kiss?
Will you follow me into Love’s abyss?
May I have this dance of the love?
As we move to the music that comes from above
In an unbreakable embrace dancing on cloud nine
Lips joined together souls intertwined

:love:

Nita ... beautiful peace
Bishop ... beautiful peace

:love:

Destee

*jus tryin to shine*

Again 2 good flows!!!
bring it on!!!!

Thankz brutha Turtle

Beautiful....just like you. That was cool.

Yes, the feeling one has when they are without the one they love. Liked the way you posed this.

wow..this so so deep and the feeling flowing from your scribe is very nice..Bishop add on wow...nice one sis
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

Sis I wanted to bring this one back because I loved it alot it shows one reason you are the newest CHAT MOD! :shades:

Sis I wanted to bring this one back because I loved it alot it shows one reason you are the newest CHAT MOD! :shades:


You are too much, thank you for all the encouragement and love.
Nita

Nita,
You never stop impressing me with your talent!!!!
I love the emotional depth!
I know the feeling
You bring out so well!!!!!!!
You are mos' def a poetess
The daughter of poetry in fact
Keep scribin' sis....I feel ya

PEACE AND LOVE
twision

this was hot nita...
:heart:
-story

Im really feeling this keep doing ur thing

Nita, this was tight, very nice flow :shades:

thanks unfoolish :heart:

Thank you THEONE, you showin a sistah so much love :heart: :kiss:

Nita mae...
you do a wonderful job so these scribes...
keep doing what you're doing...

:read: wow is this the talent behing the sweet laughter? No wonder I was hooked Line and Sinker! :laugh:

Queen, thanks sis :heart:
Scorpio, Yes this is me,..lol@ hooked, I jus try to be me, ya know..well thanks for checkin me out, :wink:

the emotion in this piece radiates
from every word...even more so
from every stanza...and the entire
peace within itself packs a powerful punch...

this was felt...

Nita,

This was absolutely moving

thanks family the love means alot especially since this is 1 of my 1st poems