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watzinaname
06-20-2004, 11:28 AM
That vibe that you send
coursing through me
is so hard to put into words
but I'm going to try...See,
I'm lying in my bed, thinking
random thoughts, when all
of a sudden, an aura waves
over my body, sent to enthrall,
enwrap, in a rapture
of pure
sensual pulsation
such an eerie, dreamlike
yet vivid sensation
causing feathery wisps
to brush across my skin
you'll never know what
a trance this puts me in
Or perhaps to you
I do the same,
causing those identical vibes.
Whispering my name
murmuring sweet nothings....
Wow ... just the thought of it makes
me smile and wonder how
a vibe can travel
through thin air
I guess magical things can
and do happen, if you really care.
Still thinking about
the vibe that you send...

queentswana
06-20-2004, 03:48 PM
Airwave vibes...the best kind, because they're the strongest kind...
very nice piece, I liked that...vibes...

watzinaname
06-20-2004, 04:49 PM
Glad you liked the "vibe" here queentswana, I appreciate your support.

$$RICH$$
06-20-2004, 05:38 PM
tyte stroke of the pen

watzinaname
06-20-2004, 05:56 PM
I appreciate your response Rich, thanks.

deepy
06-21-2004, 12:51 PM
a vibe sent me to this forum and had me read this poem..so
the vibes he sends you must come , in part, from the creative vibes you be sending him.... the energy between you must be .........
thanks for the flow

jazzymoonchild
06-21-2004, 03:57 PM
Sista Watz, Sista Watz, flow on girl!! I loved this piece

watzinaname
06-21-2004, 09:40 PM
Yes, those vibes can be something else deepy, nice to know you felt this poem, thank you.
Jazzymoonchild, thank you so much for letting me know you luv this piece.

angelicsage
06-21-2004, 10:04 PM
yep...

sometimes it gets good like that...lol

love the way you do what you do... :bowdown:

watzinaname
06-22-2004, 12:10 AM
Yes, sometimes it is like that indeed. Thank you sage for the strong support you give.

Bluewater
06-27-2004, 09:53 AM
so true dear sister
the vibe yes
like a blanket
nice poem
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

watzinaname
06-27-2004, 10:24 AM
Yes, Blue, that vibe, like a blanket of warmth, thanks sis.

kente417mojo
07-01-2004, 02:34 PM
That's a nice vibe you send Watz. Really enjoyed the feel of this poem of yours. :read:

watzinaname
07-01-2004, 06:37 PM
Thanks for letting me know you liked the feel of this one kente417mojo, much appreciated.

PropheticNsyght
07-02-2004, 04:29 AM
Hmmmmm so delicious sis. Very good!!!

7thPoet
07-02-2004, 02:47 PM
this joint traveled through the air and hit me right where i live...
i smiled all the way through this poem...wonderfully written!

watzinaname
07-02-2004, 11:07 PM
Thank you Prophetic for your kind words.
7th poet, glad to know this made you smile. Thank you.

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