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angelicsage
06-16-2004, 03:43 PM
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jazzymoonchild
06-16-2004, 04:53 PM
Wow, SAGE,
that was soft and beautiful......effortless

queentswana
06-16-2004, 04:54 PM
THE SECRET STORM...

Yes together ...you breath as one,
for he now has two hearts...and you have none.

Soul of your soul ..he has taken this space,
for what he has given, cannot be replaced.

When you travel through the storms of this world
he'll be waiting for you...his precious "Pearl"...

watzinaname
06-16-2004, 10:02 PM
Reaching out to touch
But can't yet reach that feeling
The fear holds me back

gempis
06-18-2004, 11:56 PM
uncertainty ruled
we were prisoners of our doubts
fear trumped our feelings

then we took the risk
we each took a step forward
overcame those fears

love had awaited
to our delight, in each other
now we sing the joy

Eisha
06-19-2004, 10:14 PM
The stairs of doubtness
is now conquered by the joy
of taking love's steps

Reaching the level
of delight in harmony
and continuing

angelicsage
06-26-2004, 12:48 PM
THE SECRET STORM...

Yes together ...you breath as one,
for he now has two hearts...and you have none.

Soul of your soul ..he has taken this space,
for what he has given, cannot be replaced.

When you travel through the storms of this world
he'll be waiting for you...his precious "Pearl"...


Powerful Words...I like it...I like it ...A Lot :toast:

angelicsage
06-26-2004, 12:51 PM
Breaking free from fear
I saw it in a vision
Just the two of us...

We were together
Destiny had called for us
Our time had come

With joy, I held him
In peace, he held me
Forever, we breathe...as one

deepy
06-26-2004, 01:43 PM
the fear...gone away
we both took steps, together
rooted in our love

watzinaname
06-27-2004, 07:40 AM
Love finally blooms
When it is given the chance
to breathe on its own

queentswana
06-27-2004, 09:42 AM
Finally...my love awakens...
to enter freely through
the wonders of your soul

angelicsage
06-28-2004, 12:46 AM
Love finally blooms
When it is given the chance
to breathe on its own


wow....that one hit me
with the "tyteness"...lol

let me see if I can keep up with that...lol

angelicsage
06-28-2004, 12:48 AM
Finally...my love awakens...
to enter freely through
the wonders of your soul

Oh wow...now this one was good too...

ok, ok...let's see...

and inside his soul
I will spendorly unfold
For we...are now one :spinstar:

queentswana
06-28-2004, 01:33 AM
I went inside his soul
I carved, shaped and moled
our two hearts together as "one"

angelicsage
07-06-2004, 04:51 PM
This chapter has closed
as the novel now unfolds
He & I...., The End

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