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jazzymoonchild
06-16-2004, 12:01 PM
smiling down,
as a mother would
to her infant,
caressing my skin
in nature's gentle
massage

it's sensuousness
warms me....

and I think of you

as

I do

often.


jazzymoonchild, copyright @ March 1998

angelicsage
06-16-2004, 12:28 PM
Grandmother Moon....

seems to bring so much out of us :spinstar:

Beautifully serene flow!

jazzymoonchild
06-16-2004, 12:43 PM
:party: Thank you Sage!

$$RICH$$
06-16-2004, 02:05 PM
da warm divine touch
of mothermoon
dis was awesomely sweet

jazzymoonchild
06-16-2004, 03:33 PM
Glad you liked, Brother $Rich$. Thank you!

kente417mojo
06-16-2004, 04:39 PM
Beautiful Jazzy. Short and sweet. Sounds like the type of women I like. :lol:
Well, very nice. Look forward to more.

jazzymoonchild
06-16-2004, 04:48 PM
Thank you, Kente! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :sand:

watzinaname
06-16-2004, 09:46 PM
Yes, this did have a peaceful feel to it. Nice flow.

gempis
06-18-2004, 11:59 PM
OoO! Love the wicked smoothness of this.

queentswana
06-19-2004, 12:09 AM
sweet and to the point ...I like that the moon has looked over many souls. Thanks for a nice type...

jazzymoonchild
06-19-2004, 02:36 AM
Thank you much, Queen

mickey
06-19-2004, 12:06 PM
THIS IS A BEAUTIFULLY SCRIPTED PIECE. I'M DIGGIN THIS ONE.
ONE LOVE

jazzymoonchild
06-20-2004, 11:34 PM
:grouphug: Thank you, Mickey! :star:

deepy
06-21-2004, 12:46 PM
very nice..this layered poem of space and earth
of higher and lower, round and angled..cool and warm..
very nice...and in a clear uncluttered form...very nice

jazzymoonchild
06-21-2004, 03:55 PM
I like that, Deepy. Thank you so much. :grouphug:

Bluewater
06-27-2004, 09:46 AM
very lovely poem
i can feel the enchantment
from the glow of the moon
nice indeed :)
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

jazzymoonchild
06-29-2004, 12:59 PM
:jumping: Thank you, Sista Blue

caramelpython
06-30-2004, 11:29 PM
:read: Nice one sis........... how the moon moves us all at times.
nice drop indeed.

jazzymoonchild
07-01-2004, 09:36 AM
Thank you, Python

I appreciate the support.

7thPoet
07-01-2004, 11:16 AM
to me, this is what poetry is all about.
the simile here is wonderful...

jazzymoonchild
07-01-2004, 01:29 PM
Wow, thank you 7th Poet. I appreciate that

kente417mojo
07-01-2004, 02:32 PM
Simply beautiful Jazzy. I'm gonna have to get back into this poetry forum more often and check your stuff out. :read:

jazzymoonchild
07-01-2004, 04:13 PM
Thank you, Kente. I appreciate the love...... :wave:

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