View Full Version : Poetry : Glow of the Moon
jazzymoonchild 06-16-2004, 12:01 PM smiling down,
as a mother would
to her infant,
caressing my skin
in nature's gentle
massage
it's sensuousness
warms me....
and I think of you
as
I do
often.
jazzymoonchild, copyright @ March 1998
angelicsage 06-16-2004, 12:28 PM Grandmother Moon....
seems to bring so much out of us :spinstar:
Beautifully serene flow!
jazzymoonchild 06-16-2004, 12:43 PM :party: Thank you Sage!
$$RICH$$ 06-16-2004, 02:05 PM da warm divine touch
of mothermoon
dis was awesomely sweet
jazzymoonchild 06-16-2004, 03:33 PM Glad you liked, Brother $Rich$. Thank you!
kente417mojo 06-16-2004, 04:39 PM Beautiful Jazzy. Short and sweet. Sounds like the type of women I like. :lol:
Well, very nice. Look forward to more.
jazzymoonchild 06-16-2004, 04:48 PM Thank you, Kente! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :sand:
watzinaname 06-16-2004, 09:46 PM Yes, this did have a peaceful feel to it. Nice flow.
gempis 06-18-2004, 11:59 PM OoO! Love the wicked smoothness of this.
queentswana 06-19-2004, 12:09 AM sweet and to the point ...I like that the moon has looked over many souls. Thanks for a nice type...
jazzymoonchild 06-19-2004, 02:36 AM Thank you much, Queen
mickey 06-19-2004, 12:06 PM THIS IS A BEAUTIFULLY SCRIPTED PIECE. I'M DIGGIN THIS ONE.
ONE LOVE
jazzymoonchild 06-20-2004, 11:34 PM :grouphug: Thank you, Mickey! :star:
deepy 06-21-2004, 12:46 PM very nice..this layered poem of space and earth
of higher and lower, round and angled..cool and warm..
very nice...and in a clear uncluttered form...very nice
jazzymoonchild 06-21-2004, 03:55 PM I like that, Deepy. Thank you so much. :grouphug:
Bluewater 06-27-2004, 09:46 AM very lovely poem
i can feel the enchantment
from the glow of the moon
nice indeed :)
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:
jazzymoonchild 06-29-2004, 12:59 PM :jumping: Thank you, Sista Blue
caramelpython 06-30-2004, 11:29 PM :read: Nice one sis........... how the moon moves us all at times.
nice drop indeed.
jazzymoonchild 07-01-2004, 09:36 AM Thank you, Python
I appreciate the support.
7thPoet 07-01-2004, 11:16 AM to me, this is what poetry is all about.
the simile here is wonderful...
jazzymoonchild 07-01-2004, 01:29 PM Wow, thank you 7th Poet. I appreciate that
kente417mojo 07-01-2004, 02:32 PM Simply beautiful Jazzy. I'm gonna have to get back into this poetry forum more often and check your stuff out. :read:
jazzymoonchild 07-01-2004, 04:13 PM Thank you, Kente. I appreciate the love...... :wave:
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