Will you think of me
when I'm lost and deserted
cuz you know I don't deserve this
will you remember
summers swimming in love
it was only us
and the stars above
will you think about
promises you broke
along with my heart
from the very start
will you remember
my dedication
to endless celebrations
that you never took part in
will you forget about
my fingers clearing your mouth
when your seizures came about
will you block out
that look on my face
that you can't erase
when you were caught at his place
I will remember
never to give my heart
til it's done on both parts
and I'll never forget
to change all the locks
and not believe a word that comes from your mouth
the day he kicks you out

That was knee-deep. I liked the way you rounded this off...take your time and let love take it's course...for surely it will come again, it's something you can't stop. thanks for sharing this with us.

Thank you beautiful. All you wrote is true. Can't rush it. Sometimes heartbreak is a blessing.

Thank you beautiful. All you wrote is true. Can't rush it. Sometimes heartbreak is a blessing.


It's only a blessing if you learn and grow from it, other wise it's called...
glutton for pushishment.

awesome drop this was tyte lovin da flava of dis one

It's only a blessing if you learn and grow from it, other wise it's called...
glutton for pushishment.

True...don't wanna be that. Thank you Queen.

$$RICH$$....
:peace: always brotha. Thanks

Applause!

I enjoyed this poem!

Thank you Carrie. :luvv:
Glad you enjoyed the poem.

i like this poem...and the end was the bomb....

Thank you Angel as always. You are the bomb. :bomb: :bomb:

Brother Kente,

That was seriously felt. Heartbreak can be a blessing. I agree with you. Be ever watchful. Peace and blessings! :wave:

Wasn't expecting that ending. Your words felt very real here...posed very well. We never know what road life will lead us to.

Jazzy and Watz, couldn't have said it better myself. You never know, so better be careful. Thanks for the comments. :tongue:

thanks for the flow...
true be careful....but stay open...l the creativity of yourself releases...so stay open...to receive...

I love a male's perspective
I love a males's perspective even more...
when it's just plain REAL...
this was so forceful but sincere
wonderful combination of tone
it was seamless...

your flow ..wow
blunt and to the point
you are releasing deep in this poem
flow on
much love
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

Deepy, angelicasage and Bluewater...thank you very much for the kind words. I appreciate them. :luv: Some things you feel a little more when you're writing because they are too close to home and very personal. This is one of them.

you got real skillz...keep writing cause if it didn't kill you, it made you stronger...keep da words comin'

you got real skillz...keep writing cause if it didn't kill you, it made you stronger...keep da words comin'


Thanks 7thPoet. I appreciate that. Definately makes one stronger to go through tough times like this. But that's a part of life ya know. Thanks for the comment. :grin: