jazzymoonchild
06-07-2004, 01:58 PM
I barely know you
yet, you caress my eardrums
with your voice
As I hear it,
slowly I am teased
with thoughts of you
Eased into your world
wishing I could see you
as your lips form
every delicious word
that comes from your mouth
I wonder about you
and what you think of me
what you feel
when our voices dance
jazzymoonchild, copyright@ 2000
queentswana
06-07-2004, 02:03 PM
Very nice flow...sounds like it's love in the air. Keep scribing poet your work is good.
jazzymoonchild
06-07-2004, 02:15 PM
:bowdown: Thank you Queen for the love and compliment. I love your flows, so this is big for me.
MzBlkAngel
06-07-2004, 03:28 PM
very warm flow from within
nice release
caramelpython
06-07-2004, 07:48 PM
:driveby: Wow sumbody don wispered sewwt nothings into this poem, nice drop jazzy. Keep posting :grouphug:
watzinaname
06-07-2004, 11:32 PM
Yes, the things a voice can do to you...this had such an easy feel to it.
deepy
06-08-2004, 12:40 AM
ah when you can hear it..
feel it...
know...something...know...
through sound/word/energy..
really nice piece...
thanks..
jazzymoonchild
06-08-2004, 09:32 AM
:grouphug: :grouphug:
Python - thank you, I think I am comfortable now! I love it here
Watz - many, many thanks. I'm glad you could feel it
Deepy - I am humbled, thank you for showing me love....
angelicsage
06-08-2004, 10:40 AM
~~when our voices dance~~~
wow...
the mystery of an unknown person
by whom you are intrigued...
such an air of excitement woven
into this peace...
excellent scribe...
jazzymoonchild
06-08-2004, 12:30 PM
Thank you, Sage! :sand: I appreciate the love!
Beautiful_by_me
06-09-2004, 03:27 PM
I love your flow...I love to read of the newness in a poets life...scribe on... :smokin:
jazzymoonchild
06-09-2004, 04:56 PM
Thanks for the love Beautiful! I'm also a fan of your work
gempis
06-11-2004, 12:07 AM
simple and elegant. what a beautiful reflection
jazzymoonchild
06-11-2004, 10:59 AM
Wow! Thank you Gempis! I'm glad you liked it :jumping:
Bluewater
06-24-2004, 10:54 AM
as if you were peeking my thoughts:)
yes i as well have foundl myself
traveling on that same train ride
very smooth flow of thoughts
nice flow poet
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:
jazzymoonchild
06-24-2004, 04:35 PM
Thank you so much, Blue....
You always make me feel great things when I read your works, I am glad you could feel something from mine