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watzinaname
06-05-2004, 01:23 AM
When the ease
comes upon you
it is just there.
It exists in all you knew
before, but just didn't get.
It's there in the inkling
that you felt in your mind
while your eyes were twinkling.
It was sensed when his aura
first met yours, and you entwined
in the wonder of it all.
It was alluded to in the kind
of whispers that send wisps
of feathery kisses to blushing cheeks.
It emanates from within throughout
the universe, for the bliss it seeks.
The ease of you...
God sent
For all that is intuitively known,
and all that is meant.
Ease....

queentswana
06-05-2004, 07:13 PM
I totally agree,
we can't shake the ease that's upon us, or do we want to? nice write watz I was really feeling that to the bone, thanks for that. Your writtings always inspire me.

$$RICH$$
06-05-2004, 10:19 PM
dis speaks out very well felt flow

watzinaname
06-06-2004, 01:22 AM
"we can't shake the ease that's upon us, or do we want to?" You know queentswana, I didn't realize it when I was writing this, but yeah, sometimes that feeling of ease can take us further within than we are ready to go. Your comments tend to be inspirational as well, thankyou.
Thanks Rich, this is just a collection of random thughts, wasn't sure about piecing them all together...it felt unfinished, but sometimes that's where thoughts leave us.

Bluewater
06-24-2004, 06:20 PM
so very true
what can you do
when the ease
come unto you
feeling this
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

watzinaname
06-24-2004, 07:32 PM
Thanks Blue for your kind response to this piece, which I still feel like adding something to...

jazzymoonchild
07-05-2004, 11:35 AM
I loved this Watz

It flowed "easily". But then again, all of your flows are effortless. You don't even have to try.

watzinaname
07-05-2004, 04:52 PM
Well, Jazzy, I'm beginning to like this one more...I humbly thank you for saying that it's effortless, believe me, often it is not. :)

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