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Beautiful_by_me
06-03-2004, 08:05 AM
Ring Things….


When the sun becomes shy
And the moon becomes bold…
When night becomes a single sound
And silence is all around…
When you notice the drip drop coming from the kitchens faucet
And you notice the sound your feet make when they touch the carpet
When you can actually hear the neighbors phone ring
And the humming through the walls actually sings.
When the footsteps begin to quite down above your head,
And you’ve noticed that you neighbors have settled down for bed.
When you actually notice the different sounds the cars make as they drive up and down the street…
And you notice the sounds that your legs make as they brush against the sheets…
I don’t know if you will ever notice these things….
But I began to notice them, when I removed my wedding rings.


Written by: Tia Williams 10/03

$$RICH$$
06-03-2004, 05:56 PM
such a beautiful scribe love how this run cross the page

queentswana
06-04-2004, 12:53 AM
Hi and glad to have you aboard,
wow...that hit home, that rocked me...wasn't quite looking for the end to end up like that. Wonderful scribing and I felt that one.

angelicsage
06-04-2004, 09:10 AM
oh wow...
it's funny how
you never realize the peace
you have in something or...
how much you've missed
if you were preoccupied
by it...

either way...
this was an amazing piece...

Beautiful_by_me
06-04-2004, 04:52 PM
Sometimes when it hurts inside...I write it out...

Thank you all for understanding,
to read me,
is to know me...
and the healing has just begun...

$$RICH$$
06-04-2004, 08:35 PM
indeed express release and be healed
lean on us as we embrace flow on

Beautiful_by_me
06-13-2004, 11:59 AM
indeed express release and be healed
lean on us as we embrace flow on
:heart: HEY...HEY...HEY... :heart:
:star: :star: :star:
If only you knew...how many times I use your "back" to hold me up...lol
Thanks for the renewal of support...
:star: :star: :star:
All of you, have become my threads of "Peace"...

:grouphug:

MzBlkAngel
06-13-2004, 02:28 PM
the closing of a book and reachin within
for a new meaning wonderful scribe oh such peace
love this flow....wit a power twist at the end...Angel

Beautiful_by_me
06-14-2004, 12:22 PM
the closing of a book and reachin within
for a new meaning wonderful scribe oh such peace
love this flow....wit a power twist at the end...Angel


SIZE=4]"For finding the time to read me...and sign your name"
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Bluewater
06-27-2004, 09:48 AM
smiling...nice flow
and yes very bold
feeling the release
in your poem
keep flowing
very nice indeed
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

Beautiful_by_me
07-02-2004, 04:22 PM
smiling...nice flow
and yes very bold
feeling the release
in your poem
keep flowing
very nice indeed
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:


:flamet: You ....BlueWater, makes me smile....

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