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Caesarlee31
06-02-2004, 11:18 PM
When I met love, I did not
want to know her, see her, be near her.
She, spoke a language that angered me caused me
to remember loves past and those loved before
i.e she made me crazy so much that I fired love from
loves job and moved in with love,
just to make sure love knew how crazy loves love made me.
I couldn't stand to see another man be close to love because
love should be thinking of ways to appologise to me for making
life so unbarable with out love, no matter how many day I rent the room for,
talking smart on telephones conjuring company to further
exploit my on going obsession with being in love with love and I don't know what to do?????

$$RICH$$
06-02-2004, 11:29 PM
love can take us all on a twist of fate or bring us to
memories of it's past so felt scribe ...tyte drop

queentswana
06-04-2004, 12:48 AM
Hi and welcome aboard,
That was so cute, I like the way you expressed your love for your love. very nice piece...keep the pen in motion.

angelicsage
06-04-2004, 09:08 AM
this was so cleverly written...
wow...
just to make sure love knew how crazy loves love made me.

love that line...

wonderful scribe...

watzinaname
06-04-2004, 11:31 PM
Love can have us coming and going at the same time, this is for sure. This was posed masterfully.

Bluewater
06-24-2004, 11:24 AM
HI:wave:
feeling that lost in love
kind of flow
yeah
love can have
so many dimension
nice flow
looking forward to feeling
your flows more
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

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