any ideals???

Up down and around
Two steps Backwards
Only one forward
Which way
Wake me up out of this dream
Screamin for my PEACE

It’s like a curse that has wrap itself
Killing me slowly….
Invading the mind
Chokes the heart
Crushing the spirit
Evil lurks…. and takes the soul
Silent cries at night….
Can’t see the light
As the wind blows…
Seems grace fold too
The skies turn gray
And a blue cold come about
The pain gets heavy
My feet stand firm
But this battle……..

Stop!!!!!!

Sending it up
Sent it up…..
So it maybe heal
My feet was on sinkin sand
As I walk this weary earth
On borrowed time…
Do you mine
I got a story to tell
Thinking it was no end
But….
Sending it up
Sent it up………
This battle is no longer mine….
As all my sadness wipes away
My fears disappear
The pain lifted…
I feel free..
………so free
A new day
Is mine…
A new start
.V
….I
…...C
……..T
……….O
………...R
………….Y
Is mine
As I soar on high
I yell His name in grace
He didn’t pass me by….
He took my battle and
He'll take yours too..
See....
He took my hand
……………my hand
And walk with me….
…………..walk with me
Lead me through the storm
……………storm
And healed my soul
My my soul
My spirit
Yes He did!!!!!

(C)2004

Victory be yours saint Da Lord
very well expressed

I would say, "He Took My Battle."

Girl, this is beautiful. Just bomb.

I like the name gempis suggested...fits very well. lovely job on this piece

I had to dig this piece up thank you so much for sharing it.

"As i walk this weary earth,
On borrowed time"

those lines will make a dumb man speak sense, and a bird question air, good points made her sistah, the whole scribe was twisting and turning me and i'm just enjoying the whole feel of it.................just....no words for it......just........enjoying the whole feel of it..........peace :grouphug:

these are some great titles to call this awesome powerful piece

.V
….I
…...C
……..T
……….O
………...R
………….Y
Is mine
As I soar on high
I yell His name in grace
He didn’t pass me by….
He took my battle and
He'll take yours too..
See....
He took my hand

(C)2004


Embrace victory, child, it is your birthright!

Thanks for sharing such joy. :hi:

Tis always a blessing and our due
to give praise to the CREATOR
as you do......