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serenti-poet
05-26-2004, 08:10 PM
Shoulda been sumthin special
Shoulda been sumthin great
Shoulda been tha perfect husband
Shoulda made you stay
Shoulda been alot of things
INstead you decided to be just one
Tha man who stole my heart
And had balls enough to run

Shoulda been...

:crying:

watzinaname
05-26-2004, 08:24 PM
Concisely flowed directly to the point. Maybe it should have been, but it's an open door to the rest of your life, let it shine.

$$RICH$$
05-26-2004, 08:36 PM
shoulda been that perfect one
shoulda been forgiven sweet
shoulda not made da heart weak
shoulda not wave goodbye
I shoulda held closer
but life full of concloser tales
see u striped my soul
and took my heart
u knew this where we start

Tyte poeticlly sprayed flow sistah lovin it
words kissed da page wit reality

Bluewater
05-26-2004, 10:11 PM
much love dear sister
feeling your flow indeed
Peace~n~Love
BlueWater:heart:

angelicsage
06-02-2004, 09:44 AM
nice to have you back on the page Serenti...
and keeping it tyte as always I see...

Great reading you!

Monetary
06-02-2004, 12:10 PM
Nice...very nice.....

:thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

:toast:

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