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katishia
05-22-2004, 12:52 PM
I NEVER HAD THE CHANCE TO KNOW YOU, NEVER HAD THE CHANCE TO LUV YOU, YOU NEVER GAVE ME THE CHANCE TO SEE WHAT LIFE WAS ABOUT. I HAVE THIS BOND WITH YOU ONLY FOR A WHILE, I AM CRYING SILENTLY WAITING FOR THE DAY TO COME THAT I EXIST NO MORE. WHAT DID I DO, WHY DIDN'T YOU LIKE ME JUST A LITTLE BIT. I NO LONGER HEAR A HEART BEAT, BUT INSTEAD A LOT OF NOISE AND MACHINES, I NO LONGER FEEL THE WARMTH OF BEING CLOSE TO YOU INSTEAD I SEE LIGHTS AND I AM NOW TRAVELING DOWN A TUBE OF NEVER ENDING SORROW, NOT KNOWING WHAT WILL BE COME OF ME. BUT MY SILENT CRIES, I COULD HAVE LOVED YOU, BUT YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME THE CHANCE, I WOULD HAVE BEEN GOOD BUT YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME THE CHANCE. I'M NOT MAD JUST HURT. SO UNTIL WE MEET SOMEDAY AGAIN THIS IS MY SILENT CRY,,,,, M0M WHY DIDN'T YOU LUV ME LIKE I LOVED YOU ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,BUT GUESS WHAT YOU CAN'T HERE ME THAT'S WHY IT'S MY SILENT CRY..............

$$RICH$$
05-22-2004, 06:58 PM
awesome flowing tyte write continue

watzinaname
05-22-2004, 07:49 PM
Wow. Strongly written piece about a life that ended before it began.

queentswana
05-24-2004, 12:28 AM
I NEVER HAD THE CHANCE TO KNOW YOU, NEVER HAD THE CHANCE TO LUV YOU, YOU NEVER GAVE ME THE CHANCE TO SEE WHAT LIFE WAS ABOUT. I HAVE THIS BOND WITH YOU ONLY FOR A WHILE, I AM CRYING SILENTLY WAITING FOR THE DAY TO COME THAT I EXIST NO MORE. WHAT DID I DO, WHY DIDN'T YOU LIKE ME JUST A LITTLE BIT. I NO LONGER HEAR A HEART BEAT, BUT INSTEAD A LOT OF NOISE AND MACHINES, I NO LONGER FEEL THE WARMTH OF BEING CLOSE TO YOU INSTEAD I SEE LIGHTS AND I AM NOW TRAVELING DOWN A TUBE OF NEVER ENDING SORROW, NOT KNOWING WHAT WILL BE COME OF ME. BUT MY SILENT CRIES, I COULD HAVE LOVED YOU, BUT YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME THE CHANCE, I WOULD HAVE BEEN GOOD BUT YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME THE CHANCE. I'M NOT MAD JUST HURT. SO UNTIL WE MEET SOMEDAY AGAIN THIS IS MY SILENT CRY,,,,, M0M WHY DIDN'T YOU LUV ME LIKE I LOVED YOU ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,BUT GUESS WHAT YOU CAN'T HERE ME THAT'S WHY IT'S MY SILENT CRY..............

I too have cried so many of those silent tears...I feel it with you all because I know it too well, and this too shall pass...penning it was a good thing to do. Life will unfold before your tear stained face...and replace it with rainbows :)

miomina1
05-26-2004, 06:55 PM
Nice vibe, yet sad but true. I can relate to the pain (with no understanding on whatcha did or didn't do)

Bluewater
05-26-2004, 10:17 PM
much love to you
so much have been open up in your flow
flow on
feeling you truly
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

Lloyd
05-31-2004, 05:57 AM
I've never seen a message so deep!For sure U've the gift of world and it isn't very common!U've a bright future ahead!I'll open my heart and I hope U will appreciate my flow!Don't change,stay original!
Peace
Lloyd

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