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miomina1
05-20-2004, 10:01 PM
If I told you that I'm sorry
Can you love me, 'til I die
If I told you that I hate you
Could you look me in the eye?

If I'm angry on the inside
Will you calm me with a smile
Call me baby, say you love me
and come sit and talk awhile?

If you told me that you love me
With no doubt or reason why
Fight the fire, burning constant
'Til my tears have all run dry

If you told me, that you're sorry
I will love you, 'til you die
If you told me, that you hate me
I will look you in the eye

If I told you.........

watzinaname
05-20-2004, 10:13 PM
Wouldn't it be something to know how another would react before you told them the truth? This piece makes me think of some deep questions, I'm into it.

$$RICH$$
05-20-2004, 11:16 PM
da big if leaves da question wide
yet da answers is within as my mental roams
inside this piece .......feeling ya

queentswana
05-21-2004, 01:03 AM
That was so heartbreaking...I just simply love this piece. thanks for sharing.

miomina1
05-21-2004, 12:43 PM
If I told you that I'm sorry
Can you love me, 'til I die
If I told you that I hate you
Could you look me in the eye?

If I'm angry on the inside
Will you calm me with a smile
Call me baby, say you love me
and come sit and talk awhile?

If you told me that you love me
With no doubt or reason why
Fight the fire, burning constant
'Til my tears have all run dry

If you told me, that you're sorry
I will love you, 'til you die
If you told me, that you hate me
I will look you in the eye

If I told you.........

i wrote this to my partner, just reflecting on those days(not just pms all the time) when i'm mad or agitated about something. :shades:

$$RICH$$
06-07-2004, 01:57 AM
str8 feeling you on dis we all express da reflection of way back when

Bluewater
06-25-2004, 12:40 PM
once again that two letter word
I-F (if) indeed plays a powerful role
in our life at times
feeling your flow
keep the flow coming
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

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