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Tatiana
05-18-2004, 03:25 AM
I TOLD HIM...

As my body hits the bed
I heard the pillow's request for my head
with a soft mellow voice it said
'it's time for rest my Blessed'
sleep crept into my body
like a solid grip taking hold of me
forcing my eyes not to see
the forbidden journey
into a dream created for me
as I got high on sleep
my body and soul plunged deep
that's when I heard the beep
of his watch, as his fingers traced my face
triggering my heart to beat at a fast pace

He whispered - 'you have a smile no man can erase
and you were surely worth the chase'

I told him - ' I miss those days,
the ones no man can replace'

I told him - 'I miss your strong embrace
the ones that made my river race'

I told him - 'I miss the depth of our intimate positions
that caused me to surrender to multiple orgasms'

I told him - 'I miss your fingers roaming through my hair
and that fervid, tempting stare'

I told him - 'my love is so strong,
my Love, nothing you did was ever wrong

I told him - 'I am sorry for any stress,
my King, you always deserved the best'

I told him - 'I cried an ocean when you relinquished
my heart and soul was anguished'

I told him - 'God made me for you,
whatever you ask of me, I will do'

I told him - 'I prayed for you everyday,
wishing and hoping you will stay......'
before I said, what I wanted to say
he gently wiped my tears away
and with that tempting, fervid stare,
he softly caressed my curly hair
and as our feelings of lechery grew deep
the watch on his hand began to beep
and in astonishment I arise from my sleep
in shock, deranged, I began to weep
crying for him to appear,
begging God to be fair
I want to touch him, one more time
I want to tell him, he will always be mine
a calm, cold wind entered my bed
and softly brushed against my head
I felt his presence and then I said....

I told him - 'baby, I will always love you, even though you are dead'

Tatiana (new and proud to be here)

MrBlak
05-18-2004, 03:29 AM
I TOLD HIM...

As my body hits the bed
I heard the pillow's request for my head
with a soft mellow voice it said
'it's time for rest my Blessed'
sleep crept into my body
like a solid grip taking hold of me
forcing my eyes not to see
the forbidden journey
into a dream created for me
as I got high on sleep
my body and soul plunged deep
that's when I heard the beep
of his watch, as his fingers traced my face
triggering my heart to beat at a fast pace

He whispered - 'you have a smile no man can erase
and you were surely worth the chase'

I told him - ' I miss those days,
the ones no man can replace'

I told him - 'I miss your strong embrace
the ones that made my river race'

I told him - 'I miss the depth of our intimate positions
that caused me to surrender to multiple orgasms'

I told him - 'I miss your fingers roaming through my hair
and that fervid, tempting stare'

I told him - 'my love is so strong,
my Love, nothing you did was ever wrong

I told him - 'I am sorry for any stress,
my King, you always deserved the best'

I told him - 'I cried an ocean when you relinquished
my heart and soul was anguished'

I told him - 'God made me for you,
whatever you ask of me, I will do'

I told him - 'I prayed for you everyday,
wishing and hoping you will stay......'
before I said, what I wanted to say
he gently wiped my tears away
and with that tempting, fervid stare,
he softly caressed my curly hair
and as our feelings of lechery grew deep
the watch on his hand began to beep
and in astonishment I arise from my sleep
in shock, deranged, I began to weep
crying for him to appear,
begging God to be fair
I want to touch him, one more time
I want to tell him, he will always be mine
a calm, cold wind entered my bed
and softly brushed against my head
I felt his presence and then I said....

I told him - 'baby, I will always love you, even though you are dead'

Tatiana (new and proud to be here)

Excellent Poem Tatiana.

I am glad we joined this place!!

angelicsage
05-18-2004, 10:32 AM
oh, wow...
this was so emotionally torrential
this piece cried of the purest form
of love...

Excellent Read Tatiana!

queentswana
05-18-2004, 11:22 AM
Hi there :wave:
Welcome to the both of you...for you are about to explore a home like no other.
And I must say, you came in, getting my attention. This was an awesome piece and I felt every word that was written, ...looking forward for more.

watzinaname
05-18-2004, 10:33 PM
Wow...What we can still feel for someone, even thugh they have left this earth, this was so touching, that last line just hit me with a jolt. Keep writing, I'll certainly keep reading.

Tatiana
05-21-2004, 10:34 AM
:wave: Thanks for the warm welcome and feed back.

$$RICH$$
05-21-2004, 10:40 AM
awesome scribing loving da style
welcome and happy to have u upon the family

jazzymoonchild
05-21-2004, 11:30 AM
:jumping: Wow. Welcome sister. That was, I can't even describe it. :grouphug:


I TOLD HIM...

As my body hits the bed
I heard the pillow's request for my head
with a soft mellow voice it said
'it's time for rest my Blessed'
sleep crept into my body
like a solid grip taking hold of me
forcing my eyes not to see
the forbidden journey
into a dream created for me
as I got high on sleep
my body and soul plunged deep
that's when I heard the beep
of his watch, as his fingers traced my face
triggering my heart to beat at a fast pace

He whispered - 'you have a smile no man can erase
and you were surely worth the chase'

I told him - ' I miss those days,
the ones no man can replace'

I told him - 'I miss your strong embrace
the ones that made my river race'

I told him - 'I miss the depth of our intimate positions
that caused me to surrender to multiple orgasms'

I told him - 'I miss your fingers roaming through my hair
and that fervid, tempting stare'

I told him - 'my love is so strong,
my Love, nothing you did was ever wrong

I told him - 'I am sorry for any stress,
my King, you always deserved the best'

I told him - 'I cried an ocean when you relinquished
my heart and soul was anguished'

I told him - 'God made me for you,
whatever you ask of me, I will do'

I told him - 'I prayed for you everyday,
wishing and hoping you will stay......'
before I said, what I wanted to say
he gently wiped my tears away
and with that tempting, fervid stare,
he softly caressed my curly hair
and as our feelings of lechery grew deep
the watch on his hand began to beep
and in astonishment I arise from my sleep
in shock, deranged, I began to weep
crying for him to appear,
begging God to be fair
I want to touch him, one more time
I want to tell him, he will always be mine
a calm, cold wind entered my bed
and softly brushed against my head
I felt his presence and then I said....

I told him - 'baby, I will always love you, even though you are dead'

Tatiana (new and proud to be here)

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