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watzinaname
05-15-2004, 08:51 PM
Just gonna wrap it all up
with a pretty little bow
in a tiny little box
so no one will know.
Gonna close it up
and seal it with duct tape
I would seal it with a kiss,
but my mouth is still agape.
Gonna bind it with some twine
make sure nothing slips out
this is a special delivery
taking the celestial route.
I stamped this with my faith
and paid the postage due
I can only hope and pray
this package finds its way to you.
I hear you have all the wisdom
and the remedies for such dealings.
So God, I sent you this tiny box
containing all my feelings.
I trust that you will
handle with care.
Releasing them in this realm
didn't get me any where....

$$RICH$$
05-16-2004, 04:22 AM
send it priority mail
wit care waiting
tyte drop

watzinaname
05-16-2004, 11:27 AM
Guess I'd better, Rich, cause it's a jungle down here, thank you for the response.

angelicsage
05-17-2004, 10:28 AM
Sister...

this was so masterfully written
the imagery above all...just pulls
you right into the preparation
of the packaging...

moreover, the meaning...
was so wonderful...
for only he, can resolve
the many cares we place
within the box...

Wonderful peace...

afrostotle
05-17-2004, 01:01 PM
Inspiring to the fullest!!!!!!!

Sista...I heard you on this one. more often than not we all should"Give it to God"...One Love

MzBlkAngel
05-17-2004, 01:04 PM
i am in agreement with afrostotle "GIVE IT TO GOD" indeed...
nice flow here

Peace
Angel

watzinaname
05-17-2004, 10:32 PM
Thanks for letting me know that the imagery drew you in, and the message grabbed you sage, thank you.
Afrostotle and mzblkangel, yes, some things are just beyond us and we have to just give it to God. Thank you for your support on this piece.

queentswana
05-18-2004, 11:32 AM
Just gonna wrap it all up
with a pretty little bow
in a tiny little box
so no one will know.
Gonna close it up
and seal it with duct tape
I would seal it with a kiss,
but my mouth is still agape.
Gonna bind it with some twine
make sure nothing slips out
this is a special delivery
taking the celestial route.
I stamped this with my faith
and paid the postage due
I can only hope and pray
this package finds its way to you.
I hear you have all the wisdom
and the remedies for such dealings.
So God, I sent you this tiny box
containing all my feelings.
I trust that you will
handle with care.
Releasing them in this realm
didn't get me any where....

Airmail box..."NO POSTAGE REQUIRED"...it got there before you sent it...ain't GOD good? ...my, what a big smile came over my face when I read this...it really touched my heart...thanks

watzinaname
05-18-2004, 10:43 PM
Glad that it touched you queentswana, yes God is certainly good.

jazzymoonchild
05-18-2004, 10:56 PM
Indeed where all the blessings flow.....Wonderful piece
Continued blessings



Just gonna wrap it all up
with a pretty little bow
in a tiny little box
so no one will know.
Gonna close it up
and seal it with duct tape
I would seal it with a kiss,
but my mouth is still agape.
Gonna bind it with some twine
make sure nothing slips out
this is a special delivery
taking the celestial route.
I stamped this with my faith
and paid the postage due
I can only hope and pray
this package finds its way to you.
I hear you have all the wisdom
and the remedies for such dealings.
So God, I sent you this tiny box
containing all my feelings.
I trust that you will
handle with care.
Releasing them in this realm
didn't get me any where....

watzinaname
05-18-2004, 11:18 PM
Thank you jazzymoonchild, blessings to you as well. Hope you're enjoying your stay at Destee's so far.

Tatiana
05-19-2004, 11:14 AM
Beautifully written

watzinaname
05-19-2004, 08:05 PM
Thank you so much Tatiana. I hope you feel at home here.

miomina1
05-21-2004, 05:06 PM
You haven't gotten back stamped return to sender, address uknown have you? :angel:

watzinaname
05-22-2004, 12:18 AM
No, miomina, packages sent to the God I know, always gets a response, there lies the beauty within.

gempis
05-24-2004, 10:34 PM
sister, I just love the way your mind works, and look forward to seeing what you'll come up with and the way you'll lay it down. this is outstanding.

watzinaname
05-24-2004, 10:56 PM
Gee, gempis that is quite a compliment, especially coming from a crafty poet such as yourself. Peace sister, and thank you.

Bluewater
05-26-2004, 10:24 PM
wow my sister
you seriouly bind this thought
nice srcibe
nice drop
wonderful sealing job:)
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater:heart:

watzinaname
05-26-2004, 11:17 PM
Well, it had to be packed with extra care considering its destination. Thanks for the support blue.

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