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Joyce
05-15-2004, 03:19 PM
I sought my lover,
But he deceived me like wine...
Left without the grapes. :bawling:

$$RICH$$
05-15-2004, 03:48 PM
bittersweet within
the taste of sour pour of
what once was old wine

watzinaname
05-15-2004, 06:52 PM
Bittersweet wine leaves
An after taste, causing me
To discard the glass

gempis
05-15-2004, 11:08 PM
pour out rancid wine
wash the glass clean, seek again
rainbows await you

$$RICH$$
05-16-2004, 04:38 AM
kissing da glass of
wineful taste so bitter u
just toss it aside

Akilah
05-16-2004, 10:02 AM
Discard bitterness
Allow a new vine to grow
Enjoy the sweetness...

watzinaname
05-16-2004, 12:11 PM
Very nice haiku, Akilah...

Perhaps a new vine
In the same vineyard, sometimes
we can sprout anew

Joyce
05-16-2004, 12:37 PM
Discard bitterness
Allow a new vine to grow
Enjoy the sweetness...


Akilah...I Love It! Enjoying the sweetness of this haiku! :lips:

Dior Robynsonne
05-16-2004, 06:39 PM
Sunshine on saplings
A new love allowed to grow
Bittersweet? Hmmm, No.

watzinaname
05-16-2004, 07:20 PM
Sampling different tastes
Some kinder to our palates
than others, let's toast!

Joyce
05-16-2004, 11:36 PM
I drank of his love.
I was enslaved by desire.
Oh my...his rich wines.

watzinaname
05-17-2004, 01:47 AM
Must snap out of it
And regain my composure
Inhibitions lost

MzBlkAngel
05-17-2004, 01:47 AM
captivates my soul
enhances my spirit new
sunshine rays shine yes!!!

Joyce
05-17-2004, 02:37 AM
It's not that easy.
I don't want to be set free.
I'm captivated.

watzinaname
05-17-2004, 02:43 AM
Drink freely of him
Inebriated you'll be
Drunk with his passion

MzBlkAngel
05-17-2004, 02:43 AM
Within I find to
Release, and hold my pride yes
As I take this step

Joyce
05-17-2004, 02:52 AM
He giveth sweet nights.
His grapes are sweet to my lips...
My fermentation.

angelicsage
05-17-2004, 10:44 AM
Clustering as tender grapes
I do, to his vine
His intoxication is Liquoreux

watzinaname
05-17-2004, 10:51 PM
Wow, sage.

His vine clings to me
Grapes ferment my memory
Do I see the truth?

angelicsage
05-18-2004, 10:15 AM
Barefoot in the vineyard
Botanically, intertwining truth
We ripen as one...

watzinaname
05-18-2004, 11:02 PM
As one luscious grape
Oozes sweetness of nectar
A rare burgundy

Akilah
05-19-2004, 08:15 AM
Akilah...I Love It! Enjoying the sweetness of this haiku! :lips:

Hey, :thanks:Joyce and Watzinaname,
I never thought of myself as creative,
until I discovered Destee's and Haiku... :geek:

Much Peace,
Akilah :D

Akilah
05-19-2004, 08:29 AM
This such heady love
As with a rare vintage wine
Begs to be savored...

angelicsage
05-19-2004, 10:41 AM
As one luscious grape
Oozes sweetness of nectar
A rare burgundy


Nice Watz....



1969, Vintage Grand Cru
Red density aged, flawlessly
Passion + 2 drunken thieves = one

Dior Robynsonne
05-19-2004, 04:18 PM
In my veins, he burns
I sink underneath his haze
Fever in my veins.

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