Joyce
05-15-2004, 03:19 PM
I sought my lover,
But he deceived me like wine...
Left without the grapes. :bawling:
But he deceived me like wine...
Left without the grapes. :bawling:
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View Full Version : Haiku : I Sought My Lover Joyce 05-15-2004, 03:19 PM I sought my lover, But he deceived me like wine... Left without the grapes. :bawling: $$RICH$$ 05-15-2004, 03:48 PM bittersweet within the taste of sour pour of what once was old wine watzinaname 05-15-2004, 06:52 PM Bittersweet wine leaves An after taste, causing me To discard the glass gempis 05-15-2004, 11:08 PM pour out rancid wine wash the glass clean, seek again rainbows await you $$RICH$$ 05-16-2004, 04:38 AM kissing da glass of wineful taste so bitter u just toss it aside Akilah 05-16-2004, 10:02 AM Discard bitterness Allow a new vine to grow Enjoy the sweetness... watzinaname 05-16-2004, 12:11 PM Very nice haiku, Akilah... Perhaps a new vine In the same vineyard, sometimes we can sprout anew Joyce 05-16-2004, 12:37 PM Discard bitterness Allow a new vine to grow Enjoy the sweetness... Akilah...I Love It! Enjoying the sweetness of this haiku! :lips: Dior Robynsonne 05-16-2004, 06:39 PM Sunshine on saplings A new love allowed to grow Bittersweet? Hmmm, No. watzinaname 05-16-2004, 07:20 PM Sampling different tastes Some kinder to our palates than others, let's toast! Joyce 05-16-2004, 11:36 PM I drank of his love. I was enslaved by desire. Oh my...his rich wines. watzinaname 05-17-2004, 01:47 AM Must snap out of it And regain my composure Inhibitions lost MzBlkAngel 05-17-2004, 01:47 AM captivates my soul enhances my spirit new sunshine rays shine yes!!! Joyce 05-17-2004, 02:37 AM It's not that easy. I don't want to be set free. I'm captivated. watzinaname 05-17-2004, 02:43 AM Drink freely of him Inebriated you'll be Drunk with his passion MzBlkAngel 05-17-2004, 02:43 AM Within I find to Release, and hold my pride yes As I take this step Joyce 05-17-2004, 02:52 AM He giveth sweet nights. His grapes are sweet to my lips... My fermentation. angelicsage 05-17-2004, 10:44 AM Clustering as tender grapes I do, to his vine His intoxication is Liquoreux watzinaname 05-17-2004, 10:51 PM Wow, sage. His vine clings to me Grapes ferment my memory Do I see the truth? angelicsage 05-18-2004, 10:15 AM Barefoot in the vineyard Botanically, intertwining truth We ripen as one... watzinaname 05-18-2004, 11:02 PM As one luscious grape Oozes sweetness of nectar A rare burgundy Akilah 05-19-2004, 08:15 AM Akilah...I Love It! Enjoying the sweetness of this haiku! :lips: Hey, :thanks:Joyce and Watzinaname, I never thought of myself as creative, until I discovered Destee's and Haiku... :geek: Much Peace, Akilah :D Akilah 05-19-2004, 08:29 AM This such heady love As with a rare vintage wine Begs to be savored... angelicsage 05-19-2004, 10:41 AM As one luscious grape Oozes sweetness of nectar A rare burgundy Nice Watz.... 1969, Vintage Grand Cru Red density aged, flawlessly Passion + 2 drunken thieves = one Dior Robynsonne 05-19-2004, 04:18 PM In my veins, he burns I sink underneath his haze Fever in my veins. |
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