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Bluewater
05-07-2004, 01:12 PM
i wish to bathe
in the sun rays
and towel my soul
with the clouds
to stare at the
night light of the stars
the beam of the moon
my blanket

PurpleMoons
05-07-2004, 01:34 PM
oooooh! Sista blue!
That is absolutely
breathtaking!
I feel ya!
What a beautiful
picture you've
captured here!
Loving it!

THEONE
05-07-2004, 03:28 PM
WOW YOU TOLD A STORY WITH 20 words, you got skillz hun and IM feeling this piece

$$RICH$$
05-07-2004, 06:18 PM
how sweet da feeling was
as i laid in the vision
and it was awesome
indeed u laid it out

watzinaname
05-07-2004, 07:04 PM
Sounds like you want to be taken in by all the beauty of nature. What a wonderful thought, very nicely done.

Bluewater
05-08-2004, 09:36 AM
hi :wave:PurpleMoons my sister you are so sweet ,,,thank you sis for the love:heart:
hi :wave:THEONE..ah..that is so kind of you..thank you for the love:heart:
hi:wave:$$RICH$$ for stepping into the vision thank you brother :heart:
hi:wave:watzinaname yes feeling one with the elements thank you sis:heart:

SensualReality
05-08-2004, 08:59 PM
Oh I loved this piece it did soothe me:ohmy:
much love to ya flow on:wink:

gempis
05-09-2004, 02:47 AM
this is amazing, Blue. wow!

Bluewater
05-09-2004, 08:04 PM
Hi :wave: SensualReality i'm so happy it soothe you dear sister :) thank you so much for the love:heart:

Hi :wave: gempis..:) oh dear sister you are so kind...thank you so much for the love:heart:

Dior Robynsonne
05-09-2004, 11:50 PM
Hi :wave: SensualReality i'm so happy it soothe you dear sister :) thank you so much for the love:heart:

Hi :wave: gempis..:) oh dear sister you are so kind...thank you so much for the love:heart:

Hmmmmmm I bathe myself in the
blue depths of the daytime sky,
allowing my soul to be dried by the
westward breeze from mars.
I wrap myself in my robe of sunshine
and brush my hair with the tails of comets....
This piece was simple but it said so much! I love it Blue, I love it.

Bluewater
05-10-2004, 08:21 PM
Hmmmmmm I bathe myself in the
blue depths of the daytime sky,
allowing my soul to be dried by the
westward breeze from mars.
I wrap myself in my robe of sunshine
and brush my hair with the tails of comets....
This piece was simple but it said so much! I love it Blue, I love it.
ahh yes very nice..,indeed...you flow of a sunrise new morning, and i of a sun set the end of the day..very nice indeed..thank you so much for sharing your love...:heart:

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