No feeling in my hands
Can't laugh, anymore
Wanna cry all the time
But don't know what for

Hard to breath, I'm dying
And can't feel my feet
Heart's conjested from worry
And don't wanna beat

So, sometimes I'm numb
Incoherant inside
Looking up, to heaven's door
Waiting, on a ride...

much love to you...
i feel the sadness in your flow
Peace and love
as you release the flow
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

VERY NICE FLOW .......

:sand: breezy feeling :sand:
lovin this drop:wave:

This is what I come here for, to see something different, to step out of the routine. Thanks for posting your poem, thanks.

And that ride will come, in him they'll be peace. Felt and understood.

miomina,
Nicely structured write, its rhythms its message; it speaks to me of faith and courage and patience ...
" the reward of patience is paradise"

Peace and Blessings....