*well i dont know if its a poem
just thoughts flowing in pieces..... :help:




Took my love and ran with it
Just a fool in love
Upon the moon you took me
In heavens doors…
See I didn’t want it all
Just a little would of did
But that thing of a game
I aint the one…
I search to long
To make a promise
That I cant keep…..

They say….

Love is just a touch away
Singing in the wind….

Wrap in your warmth
In the night you come
in a hush
And rush my mental
And take my breath
Sounds of love callin
Oh what a sweet sound….

But is it enough….

I can sing heavens
chorus

flowin with ease
from passion you bring……

Fire burns..searchin
Tryin to understand

Love calls me
………….Towards you…

And feed my mental
Just………
Lost in you….

Flows like a poem to me, like a stream of consciousness, deeply laid.

mental thoughts made it flow
from da deep end and wit steam
very well done from off the top
of ya head .....wow

thank you Rich i dont know it was just off the top
and i went wit the thoughts
glad ya likes.... :shades:

watz dont know bout deep
just a flow put together.... :glasses:

very expressive. I feel the lost in this poem. :crying:

:thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

:toast:

this poem was very beautiful
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

very expressive. I feel the lost in this poem. :crying:

:thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

:toast:


thanks for the love Money :spinstar:

this poem was very beautiful
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

thanks for the love sis on dis..... :spinstar: