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Dior Robynsonne
05-02-2004, 11:32 PM
In the middle
of your lake,
I chill and
eventually freeze.
Flirting with you is
something that can't lead to
anything good.
I'm skating on thin ice.
In the moonlight
of my creeping
I nearly fall in;
the artic breeze
calms the embers of my
inner flames and I almost
become cold and
lifeless dealing with your
frozen winds.
I'm skating on real thin ice
and I don't think the outer me
knows the real danger of
getting caught up with something
unusual and out of synch.
Still, will I swim or sink?
Are you something I need or just
a worthless link?
The question's spring up like
a black forest,
and I can't see the clearing.
If the tree falls and i'm not around,
will it make a sound?
Will it even hit the ground?
If I'm lost in her then how can I be found?
Sure i'm filled with a thrill, skating on thin ice,
Or is my fate sealed with a flip of the dice?
I skate and the crack threatens to become wider,
Still I skate and flip as the daystar grows lighter.
Eventually I've got to stop playing this vice,
and discontinue skating on her thin ice.

Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
~Dior X. Robynsonne

watzinaname
05-03-2004, 01:36 AM
Great analogy, liked the rhythm of it too, sounds like it's best to stay on the safe side in this situation.

Dior Robynsonne
05-03-2004, 03:30 AM
Great analogy, liked the rhythm of it too, sounds like it's best to stay on the safe side in this situation.

Looks like your right. I might need to let the cold go just this once.

$$RICH$$
05-03-2004, 10:18 PM
maybe just maybe u should
but u are felt here indeed
express on

Dior Robynsonne
05-03-2004, 10:48 PM
I appreciate the love pa. God bless.

MzBlkAngel
05-04-2004, 11:36 AM
this was tight
likes this

Dior Robynsonne
05-04-2004, 04:26 PM
this was tight
likes this

Thank you once again babylove

rasheed
05-05-2004, 12:27 PM
Dior Robynsonne,
Very nice write; i was not familiar with your work (can't catch 'em all) so when i saw your name as POTM i did a small search.

Nice job; i enjoyed the read...
Peace and Blessings

Bluewater
05-05-2004, 12:50 PM
very nice feel to your flows
playing with danger
i am liking your drops
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

Dior Robynsonne
05-05-2004, 09:30 PM
Dior Robynsonne,
Very nice write; i was not familiar with your work (can't catch 'em all) so when i saw your name as POTM i did a small search.

Nice job; i enjoyed the read...
Peace and Blessings

:teach: :teach: :teach: Once again your love is breathtaking and I appreciate it to a greater degree :teach: :teach: :teach:

Dior Robynsonne
05-05-2004, 09:31 PM
very nice feel to your flows
playing with danger
i am liking your drops
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

:spinstar: :spinstar: I'm loving your love Blue Thank you! :spinstar: :spinstar:

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