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View Full Version : Poetry : Please Shine(inspired by Floetry some kinda way)


SensualReality
04-30-2004, 06:05 PM
If I was a bird
what the possibilities would bring
I'd see all there is to see and can be heard
While I sing
If I was a bird I'd spread my wings and fly away
To stop the stress and drama that weighs me down everyday
Too young for what I see and what's constantly bombarding me
My tears fall slowly and sting intensly
Eyes sag when I weep for what seems an eternity
I never cry when a soul dies,but in my mind I hear silent cries
"Maybe they're in a better place,so wipe those tears from your face."
Everynight I pray and ask God to never let me fall from grace
When I'm going too fast or too slow try to keep a steady pace
Tired of these people relying on me to be their strong force
Away from this drama I need a divorce
No one is perfect and looking around I see that's common
For a person to believe they're God's gift to the world
Need to hear that speech a profound word
Try to be set apart from all this rain
Lifting my head up and look the pain in the face with no strain
If I could curse I would
Curse with such a horrible force I could
The devil told me I should
Go off like a fire inside the wood
But I held myself back kept it all intact
My brain's throbbing and my eyes are puffy
I need to break away from this atmosphere the air is stuffy
Now the clouds spread apart to reveal my beautiful sunshine
"....if you take away my rainbow I will cry,I'll cry..."
My mind is away from my body right now as I pause
Thinking about this is it really worthless?
Then I hear a voice above as it calls
"My beloved you are free."
Watch me as I spread my wings.
:wave:

$$RICH$$
04-30-2004, 07:59 PM
spread'em and fly high
enjoy the wind sweep
this was sweet flow on

SensualReality
04-30-2004, 08:14 PM
thanx rich :thanks:

watzinaname
05-01-2004, 04:10 AM
This was a beautiful flow...16....wow.

SensualReality
05-01-2004, 06:26 AM
:lol:Watz Aaliyah said it,"age ain't nothin' but a numba'" :wink: Thank you

watzinaname
05-01-2004, 06:30 AM
She did? Well, I don't agree with that, there's much to learn in the years ahead. But, my point is, you are already a fantastic poet, and you can only get better.

SensualReality
05-01-2004, 06:35 AM
thank you:D

gempis
05-01-2004, 12:25 PM
This is definitely one of your best yet, young poet. I really really like this. And I do feel for the youth of today, because y'all have to deal with so much more than we did when we were kids. Just hang in there and be strong. Bad times don't last, and your heart and mind will carry you through the darkness.

Peace, baby.

SensualReality
05-01-2004, 05:04 PM
Thank you gempis for the support and it is a lot out there,but there is a way to avoid it some teens just don't do it
:wink:thanx :thanks: :toast: :rolling: :peace:

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