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DEDICATION TO MY FRIEND (TRUE STORY)

Keita Kenyatta
04-05-2004, 04:28 PM
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queentswana
04-05-2004, 05:15 PM
you are right dear, ...
how far a touch is felt...no one really knows
I really liked where you took this...it was heartfelt.
luv comming at ya...Tswana :luv:

$$RICH$$
04-05-2004, 06:16 PM
indeed u scribe the real motions of a friend
i love how u did this here

MzBlkAngel
04-05-2004, 06:43 PM
very nice write
what else can i say
i likes this
Peace
Angel

watzinaname
04-05-2004, 07:20 PM
So, so true, we never really know what we mean to another life, so wonderfully posed.

unfoolish1223
04-05-2004, 07:24 PM
i felt this a lot it was deep

Keita Kenyatta
04-05-2004, 07:46 PM
you are right dear, ...
how far a touch is felt...no one really knows
I really liked where you took this...it was heartfelt.
luv comming at ya...Tswana :luv:


Actually it felt quite sad to write it...and I think it came from an undestanding that it may be possible that we may not see each other again...something niether of us know for sure.

Keita Kenyatta
04-05-2004, 07:52 PM
indeed u scribe the real motions of a friend
i love how u did this here


We are all here but for the twinkling of an eye...and yet we take so much around us for granted, especially ourselves and those we come in touch with.

Keita Kenyatta
04-05-2004, 07:55 PM
i felt this a lot it was deep

As I sat to write this...I thought to myself, suppose the shoe had been on the other foot ? It actually pained me to write this, because with it came the realization of his reality and pain.

Keita Kenyatta
04-05-2004, 07:56 PM
So, so true, we never really know what we mean to another life, so wonderfully posed.


You're right, we may not know what we mean...but isn't it good to mean something and to know that you mattered. If you mattered, then so did they.

Keita Kenyatta
04-05-2004, 08:23 PM
very nice write
what else can i say
i likes this
Peace
Angel

Sometimes there are things that go beyond words...and I guess this is one of them. I thank you all the same and really pray that I've given the brother enough knowledge to make it through.

Bluewater
04-05-2004, 10:54 PM
my goodness
this is soul deep
very tight script
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

angelicsage
04-05-2004, 11:19 PM
Brother Keita...
not only do I love to hear you speak
wisdom...but it's just as moving to
read you...this was so touching...
and yes...we never know the difference
we make in a persons life...but sometimes
were blessed to find out and find that
life long companion...receiving back,
the same joy or love we gave someone else

Adoring this piece...

Leaky103
04-06-2004, 07:23 PM
This was such a touching poem as it reminded me of when I met my good friend twenty-five years ago and just a smile from her avoided me from taking my life. I'm sorry for your friend and as you say you never know what's in someone's heart.

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