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Maturity
When I was 16
I met a guy, 23
It went str8 to my head
Cause I was mature you see
Nothing no one said
Could make me leave him alone
Determined to prove I could deal
And handle my own
Although I was young
I was very head strong
Thought the decisions I made
Could never be wrong
So here I was “Maturity”
Amazin him with mental stability
My parents wasn’t havin it
They said he was just too old
I thought they were just old fashioned
And their hearts were just cold
I had to make a choice
So I decided to act
Since my folks was trippin
I went behind their backs
STOP!
See, this was the first mistake, not listening to wisdom
My folks use to always say, they been down the roads I was trying to cross
They were trying to keep me from making the same mistakes,but I didn’t listen
I am learning a lesson that I will continue to learn for the rest of my life.....smh
PLAY!
Started sneaking off from home
Trying to be with this man
He knew things I didn’t know,
On life he had the upper hand
But you know me
Miss Maturity
thought I knew how to deal
But I didn’t you see
Soon time 2gether got heated
A lot of touchin and kissin
Tryin to be Mature
My child hood I was missin
Trying to be grown
And you know what came next
All that touchin and kissin
Soon led to sex
One day I got sick at school
In my mind I already knew
I was only 16
Carrying a child......was this a dream???
I made my choice
I wanted to keep my child
Went to school everyday
Good grades the whole while
Graduated on time
A bundle of responsibility
Handling things on my own
Now living Maturity
As for the dad
Thought he was every bit of cool
But when reality set in
Found he was a grown Fool
To all my young sisters
Don’t rush life
Take your time
Enjoy being young
So be young and shine
Family
This poem came to me early this morning out of nowhere...so you know me...I went with it
I hope that all my young sisters out there will take my mistakes and learn from them.I hope You all make the right choices in life
One Love
Nita
:heart:
Khasm13 04-01-2004, 12:29 PM very tru my sis...
take your time...
lifes little lessons can change your life
forever...this was very tyte...keep dropin wisdom nita mae :)
one love
khasm
LovelyGoldenOne 04-01-2004, 12:31 PM this is tyte...i like it alot..
MzBlkAngel 04-01-2004, 12:33 PM flow on....
only a message a good one
a deep one
you keep on you a strong sista
flow it sis
Angel
Thanks for the love family...
Khasm you know Imma keep um droppin
Lovely thanks :wink:
Mba... I will stay strong indeed, I'm glad yall was feelin this...
One love
Nita :heart:
$$RICH$$ 04-01-2004, 09:15 PM look out Nita mae u took it to a nother level here
tyte flowin from da mental gurl !!!!
mistaliberator 04-01-2004, 09:36 PM you did it again like you always do
this is something i can identify with
watzinaname 04-01-2004, 11:43 PM I liked this matter of fact style here, nita, should get everyones attention to the truth.
thanks $$RICH$$....:heart:mister:heart:...and watz
Yall know how to make a sistah feel loved...thankz
Earthly Allure 04-02-2004, 01:27 AM Babylove you deserve a nice big kiss for this one :love: My sister is seventeen and she's just brought my neice into the world. This poem is inspirational. Thank you for this.
justbnme03 04-02-2004, 01:33 AM nice put down and so so tru
Thanks for the luv family :wink:
twision 04-02-2004, 04:18 PM I LOVE THIS!!!!
Yeah there's much depth in these words.
Life's lessons, makes you become a teacher
I'm loving your flow(but you know that already)
Keep it coming
PEACE AND LOVE
twision
the_story 04-02-2004, 06:19 PM NITA!!! gurrrlll this one spoke to me soul deep good to get this out here....
:heart:
-hot sauce *wink*
:coffee:
Thanks Twision.....you know how to make a sistah feel special...not short bus special either....lol
and story...lol...aka hot sauce...moonshine...crooked nipple...lol..naw I'm jokin...you made me glad I went on and posted this....I hope all my young sisters..(I'm young still too...jus wanna let yall know..QQ) will just slow down and enjot life.
~THANKS SIS~
:heart:
thatgirl74 04-02-2004, 07:53 PM Speak Nita Speak.
Believe me I relate to this
on all levels and I am feeling your
voice.
flo-real 04-02-2004, 08:07 PM that is so so so so so true!! keep spittin that knowledge to these young bucks that think they know it all!
unfoolish1223 04-02-2004, 08:31 PM Im really feeling this u did ya thang and kept it real
Thanks family for supportin me.....
I put my biz out there so that others may learn from my mistakes....
thanks family
$$RICH$$ 12-27-2004, 04:41 AM as i read this again , telling a few young kin
this how thing end when u feel grown in da wind
it touch there life and set them str8 like food to
the soul this they ate , Thank you for being an
positive impact on the young ladies life in my
life .............this really helped them more then
you may know so where ever it came from and to your mind u set a standard
a billboard cross america should bare this strong message again thankz u just
help two not so MATURITY fine truth and self through this 16 & 17 Good girls now !
as i read this again , telling a few young kin
this how thing end when u feel grown in da wind
it touch there life and set them str8 like food to
the soul this they ate , Thank you for being an
positive impact on the young ladies life in my
life .............this really helped them more then
you may know so where ever it came from and to your mind u set a standard
a billboard cross america should bare this strong message again thankz u just
help two not so MATURITY fine truth and self through this 16 & 17 Good girls now !
You're gonna make me cry Brother $$RICH$$.
I try to touch as many young people as I can so that they don't make the same mistakes I did. I think all adults have something positive to offer our youth even if it's just sharing the fact that we make mistakes too. I'm so glad someone was touched by this poem which happens to be my favorite.
Thanks again brother $RICH$$
$$RICH$$ 01-23-2005, 02:52 PM most welcome sista because it help and change a few lives because of it
luv ya sista
thank you so much for the love :heart:
Duchesse 01-24-2005, 01:09 PM The baby just graduated with a Bachelor's in Business. Stay strong and raise that child. :climb:
1poetsought 03-12-2005, 01:35 PM Nita, this is the greatest story ever told bar none!
Nita, this is the greatest story ever told bar none!
Thank you so very much 1poet
AHMOSE 04-13-2005, 06:40 PM This piece sounds like so many people i know. I guess thats why i made it my business to know who my sister was talking to and put the fear of the Lord in them lol. Thank you for sharing.
lol@GS u r doin the right thing
cherryblossom 04-25-2009, 03:07 AM Family
This poem came to me early this morning out of nowhere...so you know me...I went with it
I hope that all my young sisters out there will take my mistakes and learn from them.I hope You all make the right choices in life
One Love
Nita
:heart:
:terrific:
I hope they can too! Your piece was awesome!
The old ones say, "A bought lesson is better than a taught one;" but I do so hope that THIS lesson can be learned w/o "buying" it for themselves.
$$RICH$$ 04-26-2009, 02:15 PM sho nuff miss our Nita May !!!
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