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From Darkness :(

Nita
03-22-2004, 10:49 AM
A prisoner of darkness
A slave to my Inner me
Burden on my heart
Ready to be set free
Here in the darkness
Weighing down my soul
Surrounding me
Hindering me
Blinding me
These walls of darkness
Not allowing my eyes to see
Oh how I long for the light
To shine on me
To set me free
To release me from
This darkness inside of me
Oh light please rescue me
My soul
My mind
My heart
All long to be........................free


:heart:Please pray for me:heart:
Nita

queentswana
03-22-2004, 11:16 AM
A prisoner of darkness
A slave to my Inner me
Burden on my heart
Ready to be set free
Here in the darkness
Weighing down my soul
Surrounding me
Hindering me
Blinding me
These walls of darkness
Not allowing my eyes to see
Oh how I long for the light
To shine on me
To set me free
To release me from
This darkness inside of me
Oh light please rescue me
My soul
My mind
My heart
All long to be........................free


:heart:Please pray for me:heart:
Nita

Hi Nita,
In the realm of where you're at (inner) should be the brightest light in the world. Where else can you go for comfort from the world ? Just relax and open your spirit up instead of your eyes.
your spirit is ...YOU...
the 'darkness' can never blind you...only you can
nor can the 'brightness make you see...only you can
so step back in...use your spirit...it's there for you...to :bowdown: to your every need.
luv you...queentswana

Nita
03-22-2004, 11:22 AM
thanks queen,
felt your word right here :heart: ...I needed a lil encouragement and hope because the devil is steady tryin to test me...smh
I took what you said to heart, really, thanks sis so much..I love you too:heart:



Hi Nita,
In the realm of where you're at (inner) should be the brightest light in the world. Where else can you go for comfort from the world ? Just relax and open your spirit up instead of your eyes.
your spirit is ...YOU...
the 'darkness' can never blind you...only you can
nor can the 'brightness make you see...only you can
so step back in...use your spirit...it's there for you...to :bowdown: to your every need.
luv you...queentswana

Khasm13
03-22-2004, 11:24 AM
as sure as the morning dew...
the light is strong within you :heart:
one love
khasm

poeticly_yours
03-22-2004, 11:26 AM
I looooooooove your poem I am so feeling this. Wow this really hit home.
I absolutely love it
Great Job

Nita
03-22-2004, 11:30 AM
ummm khasm...QQ'n do I lQQk like I'm in a field, running buck nekked thru the flowers and dew??..smh....lol...naw I'm messin.
Yeah, the light is strong, but sometimes my heart's eye is jus not open to see the True light...Thanks 4 encouragin, and being there for me ...your truly a wise king.

Nita
03-22-2004, 11:33 AM
You guys really know how to be there in the time of need...I was feelin kinda bad, but my spirits have been lifted...thanks so muc :)

I looooooooove your poem I am so feeling this. Wow this really hit home.
I absolutely love it
Great Job

MzBlkAngel
03-22-2004, 11:35 AM
Love this poem
posed well and strong...
within is the light
i have been here
knowing this i can relate...
within sista friend
Peace
Angel

Nita
03-22-2004, 11:46 AM
Love this poem
posed well and strong...
within is the light
i have been here
knowing this i can relate...
within sista friend
Peace
Angel


I know I can count on my sisters :wink:

watzinaname
03-22-2004, 07:46 PM
In prayer we can discover so many things, including that light that leads you down he right path. I'm feelin you here, and I hope that light guides you soon. This was emotively put.

angelicsage
03-22-2004, 09:43 PM
the only way out
is through the darkness...
and I agree with Watz...
prayer is essential...
I have faith that your midnight hour
will end soon...touching flow

gempis
03-22-2004, 09:44 PM
Sister Nita,

I have spent more of my life in this dark place than anyone should. What helps me even today, when the darkness is behind me, is to remember that "this too shall pass." I am reminded of the old Walt Whitman poem that ends with the stanza:

and the dawn goes down to day
nothing gold can stay

Ya see, the darkness can't stay either. Soon it will give way to the dawn and then the light.

Hang in there. Stay strong.

$$RICH$$
03-22-2004, 11:20 PM
indeed freedom is within self prayer is the answer to the hope
and path i see the light bright

Nita
03-23-2004, 01:34 AM
thanks watz...sage...gempis..and $$RICH$$...my family :grouphug:

I'm diggin all your words of encouragement...really...takin it to the heart...thanks soo so much :heart:

Alkebulan
03-24-2004, 04:40 PM
u really laid ur soul out n this 1. i can feel ur pain eminating from this piece.

strong, yet there is a ray of hope @ the end.

sounds like u nd a :grouphug: or two. don't giv up sistah

Nita
03-24-2004, 04:44 PM
Thanks Alkebulan
your words are always helpful and full of wisdom.
Thanks for the words, I took it to heart :)
:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
Nita :heart:

triniti424
03-25-2004, 12:15 AM
May you heal my sista :grouphug:
Let it flow and let God and Let go :grouphug: :heart:

Nita
03-25-2004, 07:15 AM
Jus going thru one of my dark phases...but all is well in my house...tahnks for the reply :spinstar:
Nita :heart:

1poetsought
03-25-2004, 10:13 AM
INTENSE!!! Nita, knows emotion. :mad:

Nita
03-26-2004, 02:43 AM
Emotions seem to be roamin free
all be small reflections of me.
Thanks for the reply :wink:
Nita :heart:

twision
03-26-2004, 03:11 AM
Very nice Nita
I got vivid images from this piece
As well as vivid memories

When that happens SOMEBODY JUST LAID IT DOWN :spinstar:

Peace and love

Nita
03-26-2004, 03:34 AM
thanks Brutha twision,
I tried to put into words how my heart was feelin...thanks so much 4 the luv
Nita :heart:

Bluewater
03-26-2004, 06:46 AM
much love toyou dear sister:grouphug:
feeling your flow
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

Nita
03-26-2004, 09:09 AM
Thanks sister Blue :spinn:

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