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I Wanted To Tell Her.... (Not Placed)

klabarron
03-12-2004, 07:36 PM
I wanted to tell her that I loved her
and that I would fly through galactic meteor showers
into a the black hole of pain.
Because I love her.

I wanted to tell her that I loved her
and that I would dive into the deep bluesssss sea
and snack on sharks, swallow whales in the dark
and reduce myself to plankton on the bottom of the ocean.
Because I love her.

I thought to tell her
that I would travel back in time to ancient Kemit
and relinquish my throne as Pharaoh
enslave my self and generations
free every Hebrew, make bricks with no straw
Because I love her.

I wanted to tell her
that because I love her
I would submerge myself so far into her
that upon having an emotional traffic accident
and being rushed to the local ER
trauma surgeons would be traumatized
to find that there was nothing left of me
on the gurney
for all the would see is not me
but she. Because I love her so much.

I wanted to tell her that I loved her
and that I would rewrite the periodic table
and shuffle iron, phosphate, nitrogen, and oxygen
redefine water from two parts hydrogen and one part oxygen
to 2parts her smile and 1part her heart
so that her love could become the carbon 14 dating
of my ancient years
and latent traces of her
could determine our love for years
and love anthropologists would declare
they had found the first man
that ever loved
because her love –loved me
loved me, loved me, eternally.

I wanted to tell her
that , that, that, I loved her.
but I couldn’t find the words.
So I was left with … I love you!

And guess what...
...She loves me too.

watzinaname
03-13-2004, 01:00 PM
Oh, my brother! To have a love like that, is a blessing. Your words were so deliberately aching, brimming with the meaning of all this bliss....wow.

$$RICH$$
03-13-2004, 02:02 PM
man this kinda lovin is grand and to perfection u have it in high gear
lovin it all flow head on POET !

klabarron
03-13-2004, 08:34 PM
thanks sis. keep on lovin'!
k


Oh, my brother! To have a love like that, is a blessing. Your words were so deliberately aching, brimming with the meaning of all this bliss....wow.

klabarron
03-13-2004, 08:38 PM
rich - thanks as always for your support. be blessed bruh.
k


man this kinda lovin is grand and to perfection u have it in high gear
lovin it all flow head on POET !

triniti424
03-14-2004, 07:41 PM
*sigh*
i read and find myself with NO words my brotha no words :grouphug:

Nita
03-14-2004, 08:30 PM
:jumping: :jumping: Daaaaaang.....brutha klab :jumping: :jumping:

I'm jus speechless
You always leave me like that with your spoken word....jus don't know how to respond because no words can do you justice..so I'll jus give you this


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klabarron
03-15-2004, 08:05 AM
some of us are still just hopeless romanitics... you can feel me...
k


*sigh*
i read and find myself with NO words my brotha no words :grouphug:

klabarron
03-15-2004, 08:07 AM
Much luv Sista Nita. Thanks for reading and flowin' with a brutha. be blessed. k

:jumping: :jumping: Daaaaaang.....brutha klab :jumping: :jumping:

I'm jus speechless
You always leave me like that with your spoken word....jus don't know how to respond because no words can do you justice..so I'll jus give you this


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HODEE
03-15-2004, 12:08 PM
Nice very nice.. deep too.

klabarron
03-15-2004, 02:28 PM
thanks much bruh!

Nice very nice.. deep too.

mizdee2002
04-07-2004, 11:48 AM
that's some kind of love K! u need to tell a sister what she needs to do to get one who loves like that! LOL! for real, that was beautiful. keep being u.

love ya boy,
dee

klabarron
04-11-2004, 09:21 PM
luv u 2 boooo!!!!!

heeeeyyyyy!!!

that's some kind of love K! u need to tell a sister what she needs to do to get one who loves like that! LOL! for real, that was beautiful. keep being u.

love ya boy,
dee

the_story
04-17-2004, 01:08 PM
this was extraordinary...klabarron this was a masterpeice...but then again all ur peotry is so finely writen...
:heart:
-story

Akilah
04-17-2004, 06:07 PM
This poem brought tears to my eyes... :cry:
I'm speechless...

Most sincerely,
Akilah :sand:

klabarron
04-22-2004, 07:32 PM
Ak - thanks so much for the love sis.

Peace
k


This poem brought tears to my eyes... :cry:
I'm speechless...

Most sincerely,
Akilah :sand:

angelicsage
05-22-2004, 03:04 AM
Officially Speechless...

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klabarron
08-05-2004, 04:41 PM
Thanks Sisssss!!! Much Love
k

Officially Speechless...

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