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this was hot...i luv'd tha way u posed this...nice nice flow! keep em' comin.... :spin:
*1 luV*
-tha ille$t :peace:

tight drop
likes this indeed
it was hot
flow on
Peace
Angel

This really took my breath away! Oh yes it did! :grouphug:
Thanks for such a sweet piece!
BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!

Great poem internet poet
I greatly adored the metaphores
Continue to post your masterpieces

I remember when I first touched you...
your spirit and mines danced together,
delighted together, ignited together.
I massaged your heart I remember,
stirred flames from the ashes and dying embers.
I remember walking through your heart,
amazed at the walls and floors...
surprised and shocked by the many locked doors.

I remember feeling our hearts syncopate in time,
one beat was yours and the other mines.
I knew I was getting lost in you,
and much to my surprise,
I was the captain of this flight,
as we delighted in the ride.
I remember our minds resting in the park,
embracing after dark...
while questioning our every question.
Lost somewhere in time,
lightly touching with a smile...
finding common ground and joy
in one anothers style.

I knew there was a word for all of this,
and it pained my lips to say,
after all the changes I've gone through,
light has finally shined my way.
But the chambers of her heart were very secure,
with an alarm and pitbulls standing at the door.
For deep within hidden from all eyes,
lies a treasure the world has tried to disguise.
And yet she knows it's there...
buried so far but so very near....
under confusion, pain, doubts and fears.
under issues that's been building for years.
But I'll remember you as you will me,
for in your lessons I've learned to be free.
Free to be me, to simply be,
and to remember your lessons eternally.
Yes, I'll remember you as you will me,
and the lessons of love that were meant to be.

my love will follow you...wherever you go
I've never stoped loving you :luvv: ...didn't you know?

yes, remembering you is the easy part...
cause I'll be left here...without a heart.

The pittbulls are tired of being on post...so...
let's stop all the bulls#"...and have a big toast. :luvv:

that was a beautiful poem keita

The floE so mellow...so smooth...so beautiful and so much more...
I love it!!!!!
Nita
:heart:

I remember walking through your heart,
amazed at the walls and floors...
surprised and shocked by the many locked doors.



All I can say is WHOA!!!!! I am feelin this deeply on so many levels. This is just phenomenal, Keita. Much love and many props for shining your light on the issue.

I remember when I first touched you...
your spirit and mines danced together,
delighted together, ignited together.
I massaged your heart I remember,
stirred flames from the ashes and dying embers.
I remember walking through your heart,
amazed at the walls and floors...
surprised and shocked by the many locked doors.

"PHENOMENAL"...that's all I can say..."PHENOMENAL"

wonderful peace
it just took
my breathe
away...yes
flow on
Peace
BlueWater:heart: