klabarron
03-02-2004, 09:40 AM
if i could take away the pain of the past i would.
i would hurt everyone who has hurt you.
i would turn the way of everyone who has turned away from you.
i would restore all that was lost to you 100 fold.
if i could...
but when i think, deeply, within my soul... i would not
for hurt is what has strengthened you and built character
the abandonment has taught you how to love in tough times
and loss has brought a deep sense of value to each soul you encounter.
i am amazed that life so ugly, has birthed you. beauty.
with scars and wounds and a beleaguered soul. beauty
with your vulnerabilities and insecurities. beauty.
with your failures, disappointments, and pain....
beautiful you are.
Khasm13
03-02-2004, 10:33 AM
tight piece brah...
keep voice'n da beauty...
one love
khasm
MzBlkAngel
03-02-2004, 10:36 AM
nice likes this scribe
flow on
Peace
Angel
klabarron
03-02-2004, 11:27 AM
thanks khasm/mzblak!!! peace
$$RICH$$
03-02-2004, 03:17 PM
let the sweet beauty shine in
dis drop was awesome tyte
watzinaname
03-02-2004, 07:25 PM
This just blew me away, the title certainly is appropriate.
Bluewater
03-02-2004, 11:41 PM
very deep flow poet
much love
feeling this drop
Peace
BlueWater:heart:
angelicsage
03-03-2004, 09:05 AM
Oh my, Brother Klabarron
this was so "Beautiful"...
and so profound...
I swam soooo deeply
in your words...I nearly
became lost...but your
gift brought me to the light &
back to the surface...
Encore...Encore...Encore :spinstar:
klabarron
03-11-2004, 08:03 AM
Oh sista. Thanks so ooo ooo ooo much!
Sweet baby_face
03-11-2004, 09:00 AM
Awwwww!!!!
This.......
......was.....
.............so..
................BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
Twofish
03-11-2004, 01:24 PM
I wish more people had access to such thought-provoking and inspirational words...you are changing lives with your scribes do you realize that? Allowing another perspective in an otherwise bleak circumstance. Applause...
2fish
:wave: This piece is truly beautiful and it says a lot about you. I am so glad that you are among us to share your Spoken word.I see a beautiful spirit when I read your work...Keep shining on brutha Klab...keep shining on...... :star:
MzBlkAngel
03-12-2004, 12:07 PM
this poem speaks so loud and true
i was captured by it as like a story
being told.....
likes this flow had to come by again
:angel:
give me a minute to recooperate:bowdown:
This is beautiful. Truth & love portrayed wonderfully.
klabarron
08-05-2004, 04:48 PM
Thanks so much.
k
Awwwww!!!!
This.......
......was.....
.............so..
................BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
klabarron
08-05-2004, 04:50 PM
My God Twofish. - I can't say how riveting you words were. You cut me deep to the core - thanks for the inspiration. God Bless You - by His Spirit!
k
I wish more people had access to such thought-provoking and inspirational words...you are changing lives with your scribes do you realize that? Allowing another perspective in an otherwise bleak circumstance. Applause...
2fish
klabarron
08-05-2004, 04:52 PM
You Sista's are making me cry. Thanks sooooo much Sista Nita! God Bless. k
:wave: This piece is truly beautiful and it says a lot about you. I am so glad that you are among us to share your Spoken word.I see a beautiful spirit when I read your work...Keep shining on brutha Klab...keep shining on...... :star:
klabarron
08-05-2004, 04:53 PM
Thanks sooo much MzBlk - God Bless. k
this poem speaks so loud and true
i was captured by it as like a story
being told.....
likes this flow had to come by again
:angel:
klabarron
08-05-2004, 04:54 PM
breath deep!! now... that's better. Thanks k.
give me a minute to recooperate:bowdown:
klabarron
08-05-2004, 04:55 PM
Thanks so very much for the read.
k
This is beautiful. Truth & love portrayed wonderfully.