View Full Version : Black Poetry : beautiful
klabarron 03-02-2004, 10:40 AM if i could take away the pain of the past i would.
i would hurt everyone who has hurt you.
i would turn the way of everyone who has turned away from you.
i would restore all that was lost to you 100 fold.
if i could...
but when i think, deeply, within my soul... i would not
for hurt is what has strengthened you and built character
the abandonment has taught you how to love in tough times
and loss has brought a deep sense of value to each soul you encounter.
i am amazed that life so ugly, has birthed you. beauty.
with scars and wounds and a beleaguered soul. beauty
with your vulnerabilities and insecurities. beauty.
with your failures, disappointments, and pain....
beautiful you are.
Khasm13 03-02-2004, 11:33 AM tight piece brah...
keep voice'n da beauty...
one love
khasm
MzBlkAngel 03-02-2004, 11:36 AM nice likes this scribe
flow on
Peace
Angel
klabarron 03-02-2004, 12:27 PM thanks khasm/mzblak!!! peace
$$RICH$$ 03-02-2004, 04:17 PM let the sweet beauty shine in
dis drop was awesome tyte
watzinaname 03-02-2004, 08:25 PM This just blew me away, the title certainly is appropriate.
Bluewater 03-03-2004, 12:41 AM very deep flow poet
much love
feeling this drop
Peace
BlueWater:heart:
klabarron 03-03-2004, 08:40 AM thanks blue. much love
angelicsage 03-03-2004, 10:05 AM Oh my, Brother Klabarron
this was so "Beautiful"...
and so profound...
I swam soooo deeply
in your words...I nearly
became lost...but your
gift brought me to the light &
back to the surface...
Encore...Encore...Encore :spinstar:
klabarron 03-11-2004, 09:03 AM Oh sista. Thanks so ooo ooo ooo much!
Sweet baby_face 03-11-2004, 10:00 AM Awwwww!!!!
This.......
......was.....
.............so..
................BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
Twofish 03-11-2004, 02:24 PM I wish more people had access to such thought-provoking and inspirational words...you are changing lives with your scribes do you realize that? Allowing another perspective in an otherwise bleak circumstance. Applause...
2fish
:wave: This piece is truly beautiful and it says a lot about you. I am so glad that you are among us to share your Spoken word.I see a beautiful spirit when I read your work...Keep shining on brutha Klab...keep shining on...... :star:
MzBlkAngel 03-12-2004, 01:07 PM this poem speaks so loud and true
i was captured by it as like a story
being told.....
likes this flow had to come by again
:angel:
give me a minute to recooperate:bowdown:
This is beautiful. Truth & love portrayed wonderfully.
klabarron 08-05-2004, 05:48 PM Thanks so much.
k
Awwwww!!!!
This.......
......was.....
.............so..
................BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
klabarron 08-05-2004, 05:50 PM My God Twofish. - I can't say how riveting you words were. You cut me deep to the core - thanks for the inspiration. God Bless You - by His Spirit!
k
I wish more people had access to such thought-provoking and inspirational words...you are changing lives with your scribes do you realize that? Allowing another perspective in an otherwise bleak circumstance. Applause...
2fish
klabarron 08-05-2004, 05:52 PM You Sista's are making me cry. Thanks sooooo much Sista Nita! God Bless. k
:wave: This piece is truly beautiful and it says a lot about you. I am so glad that you are among us to share your Spoken word.I see a beautiful spirit when I read your work...Keep shining on brutha Klab...keep shining on...... :star:
klabarron 08-05-2004, 05:53 PM Thanks sooo much MzBlk - God Bless. k
this poem speaks so loud and true
i was captured by it as like a story
being told.....
likes this flow had to come by again
:angel:
klabarron 08-05-2004, 05:54 PM breath deep!! now... that's better. Thanks k.
give me a minute to recooperate:bowdown:
klabarron 08-05-2004, 05:55 PM Thanks so very much for the read.
k
This is beautiful. Truth & love portrayed wonderfully.
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