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Akilah
02-10-2004, 03:27 AM
Shhhh... Be careful who you call "Family"
Sometimes "Family" isn't so very nice
"Family" often puts your heart in a cruel tight cold vice
"Family" can be a poisonous snarling snapping copper-head snake
Sometimes "Family" is more than one sensitive sistah can hardly take
"Family" can cause sorrows tears to stream hotly from your eyes
Then upon beholding this pain, act ever so surprised
Listen when I say, Be careful who you call "Family"
"Family" will smile in your face while whispering behind your back
Hurting you becomes their most conniving knack
"Family" really thinks you're blind deaf and dumb
But they don't realize all that you hear know and see
Caution : Be careful who u call "Family"
It ain't always good to be
Part of the "Family"



Akilah 2004

triniti424
02-10-2004, 03:43 AM
True sista...family often does hurt you...because family is made of humans and humans make mistakes. And in being family we live...we learn...and hopefully continue to Love.
:grouphug: my sista
peace be with u

$$RICH$$
02-10-2004, 04:31 PM
i felt the reality truth from dis
family is not always family
who u call upon i'm a living witness

MzBlkAngel
02-10-2004, 04:37 PM
really feelin dis one
so true very true.....
been in dis bed...
but you learn and grow and
carry on....
peace
Angel

Akilah
02-10-2004, 04:58 PM
Thank you Sister Triniti , Brother Rich , and Sister Mzblk for taking a moment of your time to aknowledge my piece :heart:

Much Peace,
Akilah :spinstar:

$$RICH$$
02-10-2004, 06:36 PM
most welcome sistah lot's of love to spread
so here some for u .......this was well felt my sistah Queen

Akilah
02-10-2004, 06:46 PM
most welcome sistah lot's of love to spread
so here some for u .......this was well felt my sistah Queen


Awww Thank you my brother King ..
Much appreciated... :grouphug:

Much love,
Akilah

Bluewater
02-22-2004, 05:03 PM
sister this is a nice flow
sometimes the ones
who blood flows in the same river
are the ones who most hurt ya
nice one here
feeling it for sure
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

watzinaname
02-22-2004, 09:24 PM
Having a loving supportive family is a blessing, when they are unkind and critical, they can seem like a curse. I liked the way you posed this.

queentswana
02-22-2004, 10:06 PM
feeling every word...
after many, many years of heartache, pain rejection, abuse, neglect and countless others...I have learned ever so well...to love them...from afar

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