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watzinaname
02-08-2004, 09:52 AM
Walking through the park
your hand in mine
no conversation
fingers intertwine.
Strolling through the snow
freshly falling on my face
I glance at the smile on yours
no need to speed up the pace.
Rustling through the leaves
as we playfully stride
caught in each other's eyes
casting all cares aside.
Gliding down the lane
swept in by this bliss
abruptly stopping, as we
get lost in a peaceful kiss.

$$RICH$$
02-08-2004, 07:28 PM
so lovely when da kiss
take u to a place of love
flow on

watzinaname
02-08-2004, 07:41 PM
True Rich, that's a lovely place for a kiss to bring u to. Thank you.

MzBlkAngel
02-08-2004, 07:50 PM
so true a kiss can just take u away
to a bliss of extrme within a dream
nice flow

watzinaname
02-08-2004, 08:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the flow, thanks mzblkangel.

$$RICH$$
02-09-2004, 06:23 AM
yes indeed what a kiss bring
is so sweet it make u wanna ummm!!!
sho ya right

Akilah
02-09-2004, 02:24 PM
Such lovely imagery...
Reminded me of walking
hand and hand with my
Beloved in the park
where we said
our vows...
In winter time
Thank you for that


Much Peace,
Akilah :spinstar:

watzinaname
02-09-2004, 08:15 PM
Thank you for letting me know this took you back to that romantic place in your life, Akilah.

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