I think I betta let him go

See...met him back in ' 94
If I knew how he'd turn then
Id'a kicked him in his chin
I wasn't really feelin ya,
I said why not?
See I don't do drugs
that day I musta smoked pot :yo:

1 year turned to 2,..next thing I know we @ 7
we got hitched, had three kids
I was living in heaven
But oh after the 7th soon came the 8th
You started drinking that Booze :toast:
and stayin out late

Home Alone, that's how I was :(
Me, Myself, and My kids
It still hurts today that wicked crap that you did :cry:

knew you were getting drunk :toast:
Maybe had a new girl :martian:
found that to be true,
it crushed my whole world

I tried to figure out what I did wrong :bawling:
I go to work :geek:
she stays home :sleep:
I go to school :teach:
she stays home :sleep:
I go to church :angel:
she stays home :sleep: (I've heard of homemaker but Dang)

You know what else wrong? :nono:
She's got fiftyleven kids :jawdrop:
and he wont take care his own

does she look better than me?

brother broke it down one day
He said the B**** looks like
she be chuggin hay...................lol

It made me feel better but still I hurt :flame:
He left at home beautiful treasures
for a trunk full of dirt :confused:

I have no respect for her,
she helped to fail my marriage
What she should have been doing
is pulling somebody's carriage

Yeah I want to hurt her
as well as my man yo
even thought about hiring Tony Soprano....( No body no crime...lol)

But I'm better than that
See GOD made me strong
for me he had prepared something great All along :D

I have learned not to hate
and I learned to forgive
they will stand before GOD
and an account they will give
I know it wasn't worth it
but I will keep doing well
GOD's been too good to me
to risk going to hell.... :devil:

Wow, you finished this up with a bang, so I'm creating a different response...Still emotively written, and I love your use of smilies. Yes, they will get theirs in time. Use that anger to create something positive for you.

I think I betta let him go

See I met him back in ' 94
If I knew how he'd turn then
Id'a kicked him in his chin
I wasn't really feelin ya,
I said why not?
See I don't do drugs
that day I musta smoked pot :yo:

1 year turned to 2,.. 3,4,5,6, and 7
we got hitched, had three kids
I was living an earthly heaven
But oh after the 7th soon came the 8th
You started drinking that Booze :toast:
and stayin out late

Home Alone, that's how I was :(
Me, Myself, and My kids
It still hurts today that wicked crap that you did :cry:

I knew you were getting drunk :toast:
Maybe had a new girl :martian:
When I found that to be true,
it crushed my whole world

I tried to figure out what I did wrong :bawling:
I go to work :geek:
she stays home :sleep:
I go to school :teach:
she stays home :sleep:
I go to church :angel:
she stays home :sleep: (I've heard of homemaker but Dang)

You know what's really wrong? :nono:
She's got fiftyleven kids :jawdrop:
and he wont take care his own

I mean, does she look better than me?

His brother broke it down one day
He said the B**** looks like
she be chuggin bails of hay...................lmao

It made me feel better but his family and I hurt :flame:
He left at home beautiful treasures
for a trunk full of dirt :confused:

I have no respect for her,
she had a hand in failing my marriage
What she should have been doing
is pulling somebody's carriage

Yeah I want to hurt her
as well as my man yo
I even thought about hiring Tony Soprano....( No body no crime...lol)

But I'm better than that
See GOD made me strong
He was preparing me for something great All along :D

I have learned not to hate
and have learned how to forgive
For they will stand before GOD and an account they will give
I know it wasn't worth it
but I will keep doing well
GOD has been too good to me
to risk going to hell.... :devil:




Alpha Male speaks about your Poem and states "it was a delight!"
The storry line also called the plot was out of sight
Hope this didnt happen to you
and your presently not blue
Keep informing others about good females plight!!!!!!!!

Hey welcome back !!! :wave:
Very nice scribing
Enjoyed it a lot ....

Much Peace,
Akilah :spinstar:

lol@fiftyleven kids :lol:
this is tyte as all heck...

sometimes catz don't know a good thing when they got it...
one love
khasm

Thanks watzinaname,Alpha Male, Khasm...lol and Akilah
Thank you for checkin me out, your support means alot
I'm gald you liked it.
Yeah, this really is happening to me, and yes Khasm I said fiftyleven...lol That's a southern numeral...lol
Peace and much love :heart:

sister nita nice scribe...
the emotion is felted here
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

really feeling this one. I've been through trail and tribulations with me ex some time ago. but now my mind has been set free. keep it coming.

BLESSINGS INTINUALLY UNTO U AND YOUR FIFTELEVEN KIDS.
JAH DIVA

she don't have fiftyleven kids :lol:

Nita, you are still crazy and l still have madd love for you

blessings and peace to you and yours..
jh.

wow i missed dis one and it was wooooweeeee!!
tyte flowing u scribe dis so smoothly flow on

sister nita nice scribe...
the emotion is felted here
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

Thankz for the luv

So you know how hard and how painful this is...
and I will keep it floe'n
thankz for readin

Wuz up $$RICH$$ :spinstar:
I'm glad you like this one.
I've been away for a while and wuz unsure if the floe wuz still there.
Thankz for supportin a sistah :heart:

Wuz up!!!!!!
Yeah, I'm still crazy...lol
I have been wondering How you've been.
It does me well to hear from you.
Thanks for the wishes of blessings.
Hope we can talk soon, I'd like to hear what you've been up to.
Byeeeeeee JeHi

Sister, I commend you for such a brave piece
and the strength I found in this beyond the
humorous lines (fiftyleven kids- southern numeral)
You are obviously a survivor...
Feeling your work!

I think I betta let him go

See I met him back in ' 94
If I knew how he'd turn then
Id'a kicked him in his chin
I wasn't really feelin ya,
I said why not?
See I don't do drugs
that day I musta smoked pot :yo:

1 year turned to 2,.. 3,4,5,6, and 7
we got hitched, had three kids
I was living an earthly heaven
But oh after the 7th soon came the 8th
You started drinking that Booze :toast:
and stayin out late

Home Alone, that's how I was :(
Me, Myself, and My kids
It still hurts today that wicked crap that you did :cry:

I knew you were getting drunk :toast:
Maybe had a new girl :martian:
When I found that to be true,
it crushed my whole world

I tried to figure out what I did wrong :bawling:
I go to work :geek:
she stays home :sleep:
I go to school :teach:
she stays home :sleep:
I go to church :angel:
she stays home :sleep: (I've heard of homemaker but Dang)

You know what's really wrong? :nono:
She's got fiftyleven kids :jawdrop:
and he wont take care his own

I mean, does she look better than me?

His brother broke it down one day
He said the B**** looks like
she be chuggin bails of hay...................lmao

It made me feel better but his family and I hurt :flame:
He left at home beautiful treasures
for a trunk full of dirt :confused:

I have no respect for her,
she had a hand in failing my marriage
What she should have been doing
is pulling somebody's carriage

Yeah I want to hurt her
as well as my man yo
I even thought about hiring Tony Soprano....( No body no crime...lol)

But I'm better than that
See GOD made me strong
He was preparing me for something great All along :D

I have learned not to hate
and have learned how to forgive
For they will stand before GOD and an account they will give
I know it wasn't worth it
but I will keep doing well
GOD has been too good to me
to risk going to hell.... :devil:

feeling this one, mannnn i know how u feel,,,,

Thankz Angelic
Yes humor helps me to heal
Yall keep prayin for my strunff...lol... I mean strength
Sister, I commend you for such a brave piece
and the strength I found in this beyond the
humorous lines (fiftyleven kids- southern numeral)
You are obviously a survivor...
Feeling your work!

This is not a good feeling to be going thru but yall supportin me and feelin my words meas alot to me.
I will always be thankful

feeling this one, mannnn i know how u feel,,,,

Sister Nita . :jawdrop: ...Whoa this was a nice scribe indeed, I was feeling the whole flow :deal:

Sometimes it's hard for me to express myself, but I really like this one.
Thankz Caramelpython
:heart:

Nice scribe queen. They will have to answer to GOD. The things he has in store for you will rock your world.

blak

Yes, God must have something really greeeeeat in store for me, I have suffered , now I'm ready to claim what's mine.
Thanks dear poet
Nita :heart:

I'm likin this. Yr words just caught me.
Reat tyte.

this was a tite scrybe nita:)...and believe me,...Karma will get 'em!!!:teach:

WELCOME BACK!!!:grouphug:

Thanksz for da luv.
I hope my future pieces will be even tite'R .
Nita

thats crackin!! im feelin u yo, sorry to hear all that happened, but like u said god lent a hand. nice flow, god bless...

"I have learned not to hate
and have learned how to forgive
For they will stand before GOD and an account they will give
I know it wasn't worth it
but I will keep doing well
GOD has been too good to me
to risk going to hell.... "

honey child i've been here been here been here feel u feel u feel u

{what doesn't kill us always makes us stronger}
you a warriorqueen...and YOURS IS COMING, guaranteed

1luv

oh my.....this was so touching....I was so speechless at the end....because I can just see his face when he read it...... :toast: ....much luv sis......this was great.....props given

even tho this did happen I had gained so much from it..I am so much stronger and a much better person..if that's possible..lol
But thanks for the love Famlee
keep me in your prayers P eaaaaccce!!! :wink: