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cojamalik
02-02-2004, 10:49 PM
My black sister,
how I have wronged thee!
I inflicted pain on you,
to temporarily empower me.
Please, please forgive me,
for now I can see
past the jealousy that once blinded me.
I took from you what I thought was gold.
To find out he was rusty and old.
I was a fool, and to foolish to see.
T be with him would destroy everything good in me.
Then stepped in the law of reciprocity
For what he did to you,
he also did to me.
This my formal apology to thee!

$$RICH$$
02-02-2004, 11:27 PM
tyte scribing of forgiveness

true love
02-03-2004, 11:17 AM
This was soo beautiful...much love and apology accepted. :heart:

MzBlkAngel
02-03-2004, 04:40 PM
to forgive is easy
to understand and heal
is harder...nice flow
tight drop

angelicsage
02-06-2004, 07:56 PM
this was very original in concept
love the perspective you brought
very nice flow...

phenomenalwoman
02-15-2004, 05:06 PM
NICE. that was very big of you to step up like that

Bluewater
02-15-2004, 11:17 PM
very nice drop sis.feeling you on this..straight from the heart
Peace
BlueWater:heart:

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