View Full Version : Poetry : Beauty Beaming
kente417mojo 01-30-2004, 06:34 PM Lovely
beaming
glowing
hair flowing
round belly
yes, I did that
more beautiful than ever
listening to
fluid-fill laughter
feet pressing at me
as I nosily listen
what's she doing
sounds like she's swimming
9 months from now
I'll be able to ask her
she won't respond
she'll be a new-born
but her and her mother
are already one
most beautiful thing
she can go through
makes me love her even more
constantly kissing her stomach
she acts as if I'm crazy
only about her
and the fact that we
did this out of love
we both had the feeling she was
never seen her smile so much
never seen her eat so much
she's still sexy to me
adding to the family tree
$$RICH$$ 01-30-2004, 07:06 PM in da motion of love
very sweet piece
watzinaname 01-30-2004, 08:46 PM This was beautiful, seeing the beauty in a woman with child, flow on.
true love 02-03-2004, 01:47 PM I couldn't believe it when i read this poem...all i can say is, "what a man!" this was just soo soo beautiful and i could tell it was straight from your heart. much much love to you!
kente417mojo 02-05-2004, 12:09 PM Thanks all. Peace to all of you. Thanks for giving me so much good stuff to read.
Akilah 02-05-2004, 02:14 PM Wow... :luv:
Love
the way
you scribe
Just beautiful...
Much Peace,
Akilah :spinstar:
kente417mojo 02-05-2004, 04:11 PM Thank you very much...and Happy Birthday Akilah.
angelicsage 02-06-2004, 07:52 PM this was sooooooooo beautiful....
it nearly brought tears...
Enjoyed it immensly!
MzBlkAngel 07-18-2004, 12:49 PM this was beautiful
what love
emotions wow
glad i found it
Peace
Angel
jazzymoonchild 07-19-2004, 02:51 PM This is the ultimate love poem, Kente. Really, really precious.
kente417mojo 07-20-2004, 03:47 PM Hey, where did you guys find this old thing? Thanks for the comments Angel and Jazzy. I don't know how you found it but it must have been piled under a bunch of stuff. :shades:
jazzymoonchild 07-20-2004, 03:58 PM I just read it again, and there is an unmistakable and uncompromising beauty about being pregnant and a man who seems to double the love shown to you while you carry the future in your belly. Its awesome.
Alpha Male 08-07-2004, 03:45 PM Kente417mojo, You expressed anticipation and love for your mate poeticly
So how is it to be a dad ? does the child favor you genetically?
Great poem you have made
Now go and seize a great day
Please show me some of your love
Today read and reply to my thread in “Get your flow on”
" Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
or show nuff real----------Thank You
If you read and replied once!
Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
PurpleMoons 08-07-2004, 07:43 PM Awwww!
There is nothing more
beautiful than a man
adoring the stages
of a women with child!!!!
Very Beautiful Kente417mojo!!!!!
Congratulation!!!!!!!
PurpleMoons 08-07-2004, 07:45 PM Hey Sista Jazzy!
I just word your reply!
It must be a moonchild thing!! :x:
CarrieMonet 08-16-2004, 04:03 PM Wow! That was a really beautiful poem, always nice to get a peak in a man's head when he knows he has a bundle on the way. Your future looks brighter every day.
toylin 08-17-2004, 09:19 PM Awww.......... now that was beautiful! Many, many people fail to see the beauty in creating life.... You've captured it perfectly. Thank you for sharing this one wit us.
jazzymoonchild 08-17-2004, 11:19 PM I read this again, Brother Kente. It is just so so beautiful. This is love.
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