As the rumble
on land continue
the quiet sea
is still and
water waves
crash da rocks
like love bashing
my heart
as my soul is quiet
lone for ya embrace
and the smile
so my mind can trace
in the Gentle waters
of love as we sail
the icy sea of bliss
into our own sweet
paradice
where two bodies
cross in love making
like sea & da ocean
givin birth to da pond
i only wanna feel da
wholesome of u
tonight we play in
Gentle waters
testing our hearts
and flashing love
let the river cry out
in joy for i am coming
to make sweet love
and caress the hype
from da myth told
tenderly we go down
stream paddle flappin
boat rockin
gracefully to our tune
u and i
in da tested waters
of love ...... :love: :spin:

nice flow
on testin the
waters of love.....
:angel:

indeed thankz sistah for da hit on dis piece

Very cool piece man,
"Like the sea and ocean, giving birth to the pond"
that was it right there. You hit it on that one. Nice

big thanks for the stop and showing love
ya pen is awesome and i love it
peace

this is a lovely piece.

The title is soulsoothing &
the content took be there.

thank you :)



poetrysouldeep!
Coco :heart:

thank u coco... happy u felt the soft gentle waves

Very serene romantic scribe, I can just see those waves....flow on.

it's what i love the quiet gentle moments
as i vision da sea & love mixing it's beautiful
thankz sistah Queen watz.

rich this is a beautifull lovely piece..


you know you always writes knock outs..
but we are here to remind you...




Love l :heart:

thank u libertyLady i just try my best to bring it right
ya wordz mean a great deal to me ...