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I don't know what you're feelin

kenyatta
01-24-2004, 10:50 PM
I don't know what you're feelin, how you're reelin,
or what your heart has been concealin,
but I'm here to make it plain,
that as black people we've all been in pain.
We hurt each other in the name of love
while our heart is slowly peelin....
but I wish I could touch all of you
and start this process we call healin.
To my brothers who often fake the funk,
it's okay to cry without bein a punk.
It's okay cause I look and I understand
the emotional prison locked in a man.
And to all my sisters it's hard to be
something other than what's molded by society.
But I cut off the lights when I'm all alone,
and I cry like a child instead of a man that's grown.
I cry when I walk the streets and see,
the pain in others who look just like me.
No, I don't know what you're feelin but I got your back,
who am I, I'm just a brother but I'm keepin it black.
I'm keepin it black and straight from the hip,
for we all arrived here on the same ole ships.
The only friends I have are us as I reflect,
and I depend on my people to keep a brother in check.
I depend upon you as our Creator made doves,
to just look in my eyes with reflections of love......PEACE...LOVE YA

Keita

PositiveMindset
01-25-2004, 02:35 AM
Big brother, my 3rd eye reflects the love that U have given.

I'm diggin' what you're workin' out of.

Keep 'em comin.

$$RICH$$
01-25-2004, 03:09 AM
word up feeling dis here flow on

watzinaname
01-25-2004, 07:14 AM
If we can't look to each other for love, then who? Feeling this, wanting to hear more.

angelicsage
01-25-2004, 08:20 PM
Brother....what I'm feeling is your wonderful craft
and masterful poetry...

This piece touched the remnants of my very own thoughts and feelings.

Excellent piece!

Khasm13
01-26-2004, 11:27 AM
word...i felt those...
keep scribe'n man...
cause this is on point
one love
khasm

Bluewater
01-26-2004, 06:13 PM
this is indeed awonderful flow
eyes wide open..i am feeling your message
in this here scribemuch love and respect
Peace
Blue:heart:

krazelyricks
01-26-2004, 06:54 PM
awwww.....I'm feelin this and it's depth....I love the flow.....it was madd deep....lookin for more by you.

foxy......

Leaky103
01-27-2004, 12:37 PM
I understand and many times I may have been the one you seen with pain and angst on my face and in my eyes. Thank you for the acknowledgement that you have my back and I will definitely have yours and my other folks as well.

Thanks for this one!!

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