sit on a star
Watchin…..
Wondering if you know
Whats there…..
An angel touch you….
But you made her cry..
as you hurt not knowin she
stay in a hush…….
Watchin…..
Watchin….
Silly is the game….
Fool is the love
But all in all
She knows as she
Sit on a star…..
Singing
Love oh love
Just leave me alone…..
If you don’t mean me no good
Tell cupid to mind his own
Business and leave me alone….
Love oh love….
Don’t live here
No more
No more…
She sings upon a star….
I played the fool
Once to many…….
Oh love love…
Please go away….
The pain inside is
burning so deep…
Watchin as it walks away
Once more….
She sits upon a star….
Watchin…..
Just
………Watching
as it goes…..

pieces of untitle life
a blackangel thang.....
copyright 2004

as our sister coco would say, I'm feelin this soul deep, girl

Oh lord, Cupid must need a vacation, he's lost his aim again. True love finds it's way in time so they say. Nicely done.

Give cupid time....the arrow is on it's way....let it hit its target first...Ok?

Keep the faith.

:thanks: for sharing.

:toast:

the love in her heart
is gone shall never return....
for the love that walk out
did not give a ummmm
as she floats on her star...
she sings she sings....
oh love oh love....
Just leave me alone…..
If you don’t mean me no good
Tell cupid to mind his own
Business and leave me alone….
she sings...............................

nice scribe tell cupid !!
dis was delightful

Very cool. I love the way that this poems flows. Very easy to read and to feel.