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$$RICH$$
01-15-2004, 04:02 AM
River run red
blood slide
into the pond
where he loom
the dark night
of da beast
seeking
for the souls
swim
da fear alert
rise
code RED "

MzBlkAngel
01-15-2004, 02:08 PM
so little but this says alot....
tight drop.......Angel
you and these scribes man
oh man they be deep

GeneticSoul
01-15-2004, 03:47 PM
so little yet says so much i agree power comes in the smallest packages

$$RICH$$
01-15-2004, 06:13 PM
angel ...... i tell u he here upon the walks of land
the rude awaking comming

GeneticSoul.........yes the power is in the fear
of red alert !!!

thankz u two for the visit & support

MzBlkAngel
01-15-2004, 06:15 PM
i am watchin
and i am listenin
sittin in da light
drinkin my :coffee:
flow on...

$$RICH$$
01-15-2004, 07:27 PM
indeed.................

watzinaname
01-15-2004, 08:38 PM
And now you visually draw us in....code red...deep.

$$RICH$$
01-15-2004, 09:30 PM
yes indeed the red eye in code red

ExquisiteBalla
01-16-2004, 10:13 PM
That was deep Rich. Keep bringing the insight.

$$RICH$$
01-16-2004, 10:59 PM
indeed brutha
i have to alert everyone
of his wickedness

angelicsage
01-17-2004, 01:51 PM
the imagery and tone in this piece was incredible...
flow on Rich!

$$RICH$$
01-17-2004, 04:18 PM
indeed sistah RED alert
of the destructional mass
we face in this world
where do it all end ?
Thanks for the read and time shared

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