They say it is better
to give, then to receive,
So what then, should I give
to you before we leave
this life. Before our reign is over.
If I leave you my eyes,
they would forever mirror
wonderment into your soul's guise.
If I leave you my lips
they would always
suckle the drips
of your tears, happy or sad.
If left with my hands
you'd be left with my
most intimate scribe,
caressing our lifelong vibe.
If I leave you my heart,
it would permeate your mind
leaving you awestruck
at the depths of passion you'll always find.
So what then,
should
I
give
to
you...

i likes this
it was a nice drop
:angel:

Mzblkangel, thank you for feeling the flow...

giving is the key
and yes u should
in this life
and hummmm
even be called my
wife
but no need to keep
it tucked away
Nice flow dis was very smooth keep flowin sistah

i like that a lot
fill there heart and fulfills what god has taught
how he has taught us to be giving and loving

nice flow
much love
Gen~Ethic soul

Yes, giving is the key, Rich, you thought it was smooth? Why, thank you...
Thankyou for feeling the grace of the words, Geneticsoul.

holy crap, what an amazing concept. mass props to you for this, girl. great flow

amazing? Well, I don't know gempis, it's just what popped into my mind at the time...Thank you.

indeed sistah u have a very nice vibe

I'd like to think that vibe is the true inside clawing its way out...thank you....Rich

Awww...Sister this was a wonderful flow...
this one touche me deepply
thanks for sharing this piece

Quite welcome, angelicsage...glad it touched you so.