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oldsoul
12-26-2003, 11:30 PM
ONLY


Only CREATOR can write a perfect song.
It could be sung in every tongue
And not a single word is wrong.
It would be # 1 on the charts Forever.
Only CREATOR could write such a song.

Only CREATOR can paint a perfect picture.
So beautiful it would make the blind see.
So powerful it would heal all broken hearts.
So brilliant it would glow in darkness
and light a pathway to the lost.
Only CREATOR could paint such a picture.

Only CREATOR can write a perfect prayer.
It would bring peace to the ill at ease,
Bring a cure to all disease,
And bring an end to all our wars.
Only CREATOR could write such a prayer.

Only CREATOR can make a perfect plan.
And then create a perfect man
Complete with endless possibilities
To appreciate the wonder of
All of CREATOR's perfect art.
Only CREATOR could make such a plan.
ONLY.

OldSoul(2003/12/26)

$$RICH$$
12-27-2003, 12:50 AM
this was so beautifully written had me in smiles & awwwwe
wow.....flow on

GeneticSoul
12-27-2003, 12:55 AM
only is true
only is powerful
man im love that
flows like a waterfall full of passion

Gen~Ethic

LibertyLady
12-29-2003, 07:14 PM
Old soul....................


this is just wonderfull....



only the creator choose you to write such a Poem..


thank you for reminding us..




Love Liberty

Bluewater
12-30-2003, 10:51 PM
i am so touched by your poem...wonderful peace from within deep
Peace
Blue :heart:

triniti424
01-29-2004, 02:08 AM
I am blessed with this beautiful piece/peace...:grouphug:

watzinaname
01-29-2004, 06:25 PM
The wonders of the creator...nicely done.

queentswana
04-04-2005, 11:49 AM
This is truely amazing...
and if I, had ten thousand tongues...
I'd speak it to the world that, you know...what you know.
surely poet...
I'm watching the "creator's" work...through you :welldone:

PurpleMoons
04-04-2005, 12:18 PM
This is beautiful! The creator must have kissed your mind, cause only the Creator can inspire such a beautiful write!

AHMOSE
04-13-2005, 05:31 PM
Leave it to brother oldsoul to hit us with the truth
Thank you for sharing.

angelicsage
04-27-2005, 04:03 PM
...someone unearthed a diamond
from the archives

Oldsoul you work is so flawless
there's never anything I can say
to add to it...
My accolades are paled by the
light that radiates from your work

Forever impressed...
Sage

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