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cuvriefloesta
12-20-2003, 02:44 PM
I am the forgotten one
The long ignored and down trotten one
The one behind the slide
watching as the light skin one slides down...

slide down little light skin girl
I hope you land on rocks
cause i hate your little long pony tails
and those ruffles in your socks

I don't know why i feel this way
but i know i do
cause i'm watching that BET video
and all i see is you

where am i
am in that video
hiding behind the slide
naw i'm there but the camera doesn't show my face
it only zooms in from behind

i have no one to look up to
so i must look down on you
because i am the forgotten one
behind the slide
watching you

MzBlkAngel
12-20-2003, 05:45 PM
nice flow
i likes

$$RICH$$
12-20-2003, 06:42 PM
nice drop felt it

Bluewater
12-21-2003, 05:20 PM
wow...release it in the flow...feeling you on this scribe
Peace

cuvriefloesta
12-23-2003, 11:28 PM
Thanks Again!!!

$$RICH$$
12-23-2003, 11:51 PM
most welcome keep lovin and giving as love is given unto u

MzBlkAngel
07-18-2004, 12:57 PM
enjoyed the read again
Peace
Angel

queentswana
07-18-2004, 10:19 PM
Sometimes we are the "forgotten ones" ...but only we can fix that, come to the front line and shine where you would and should be. Light has a awesome shine...behind "black"

watzinaname
07-18-2004, 10:54 PM
Shaking my head at the images placed before us to make us feel that we are less. When actually we are beautiful no matter what shade of blackness. You brought this all the way home.

gempis
07-19-2004, 01:16 AM
Oh lord, this is so right on! It pains me, but it's real. You dropped this majestically.

jazzymoonchild
07-19-2004, 02:49 PM
Wow, that's a shame that we can't seem to get around this issue. This is deep

angelicsage
07-20-2004, 08:52 AM
Sometimes we are the "forgotten ones" ...but only we can fix that, come to the front line and shine where you would and should be. Light has a awesome shine...behind "black"


I'm going to "second" this...

I can't think of a better way of putting it...

Compelling peace, Poet!

MrBlak
07-20-2004, 09:09 AM
Colourism is an ugly topic....I think you handled it well and you flowed nicely.

lil'MizzUnique
07-23-2004, 06:13 PM
I'm lovin it !!

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