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thespokesman
12-18-2003, 05:56 PM
The sun shines bright

Ha…oh
Ha..
Ha…
Yeah……

I know
Ice glow
Like snow melt
Problems pain
Is dew in disgust
Craving for
Lust
Must
Battling night
Can-i-bus

In the second wind

What I’m on now
Grass grows
Blades split apart
Spark new growth
I’m just a host
Give toast
Those who had
Moonlight boast
Moon shines time little
Partial
Carry this parcel

Third degree

Good news delivered
Morning
Moaning
Mourning
Transplant
Like this monin
Good breakfast
Eggs grits
Inflate
When flat like p-cakes
Today’s date
Don’t matter
Another rise is great

Crunch time

Captain
Of ship
Sun let you breath
Shine on shady character
Bring light to sitiuatio
When vision is so-so
Know though
Give way to days
When no dough
Brighter day
When dark times
Hover
My brother
We love ya
Hugger
Millions souls
Siddam’s
Snipers’
Jacksons’
Give bright light
Quite sprite
Thirst
Like
No
other

$$RICH$$
12-18-2003, 07:06 PM
so bright and beautiful wow !!!!
dis was awesome work

Bluewater
12-18-2003, 08:15 PM
wow this is great ...you really but some curves in this nice flow
wonder
Peace

MzBlkAngel
12-18-2003, 08:31 PM
wow i was hook
nice flow indeed......

cuvriefloesta
12-20-2003, 03:05 PM
I really liked your poem...i think? Naw just playing it was cool. Uof H huh? I might be there too. :sand:

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