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N2urSoul
05-23-2001, 05:56 AM
My whole heart is trapped
inside a tear drop
that has formed
on the inside of my
soul
and I don't know
how to stop
the tear
from
d
e
s
c
e
n
d
i
n
g

I wish you could
catch that tear
inside the palm
of your hand
before it hits
the floor and
breaks--
with my heart inside
of it ...

Save the love
I have for you
before
it dies an
untimely death
as I
begin to
cry~~


(c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA

Afridancr
05-23-2001, 05:18 PM
Know this feeling all too well.

N2urSoul
05-26-2001, 10:29 AM
I know just what you mean...!

Thanks for the read!

shaneak
07-02-2001, 02:10 PM
That was deep...all that held in one tear drop. I refuse to cry...for i know that if they flow...they will go by and by....

Wonderfully done N2...Wonderfully said....

$$RICH$$
01-30-2006, 12:47 PM
i've inside this place and felt the emotions
this spill out to canvas like water

mz_phi1
01-30-2006, 03:00 PM
I Felt This Piece....Very Deep...Keep It Up

sonnee01
01-30-2006, 03:12 PM
Sweet... Sweet... Sweet!!!

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