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osEYEris
09-13-2003, 12:03 PM
Frequently I'll cuddle with your emotions
Carefully caressing your every worry
Making sure the door to your heart is open
Patience is mine, I'm in no hurry
I'm glad to be the one you have chosen
And by your side I will always be
Whatever path you decide to go in
Where ever you are, think of me

Softly I'll massage your past heartaches
Gently rubbing away the hurt and pain
With Love, I'll do whatever it takes
No it's not your fault, you are not the blame
Your soul, your spirit I passionately embrace
As I daringly shield you from the rain
In my heart for you there's a special place
And you didn't even have to sign your name

Endless conversations to ease your mind
A soothing melody for you I'd sing
Romantic verses for you I'd rhyme
A bounty of roses for you I'd bring
Radiant, describes your face as it shines
Refreshing Like the first day of Spring
Gracious and beautiful time after time
Your forever my sweet Lady, forever my Queen

$$RICH$$
09-13-2003, 05:16 PM
so well done i love ya flow
keep it comming....wow!

suddenpassion
09-13-2003, 06:06 PM
This is beautiful, keep it comin!!!!

SUNkissed
09-13-2003, 06:43 PM
lovin this.... flow
feelin it for real..(snaps)
beautifully expressed!

gempis
09-13-2003, 10:44 PM
This is just stunning. Whomever has you is the luckiest in the world - no joke.

LibertyLady
09-15-2003, 12:15 PM
....................Oseyesris....................


breath taking....

blessfull woman she is..



Love L

Truman
09-17-2003, 04:09 PM
Very well said...wonderful prelude, interlude, and postlude in any romance.

Bravo, Poet!

Truman

UniverSouL
09-19-2003, 12:54 PM
This is a very melodious and lyrical poem.

I like the rhyming of it, simple but elegant.

Nice.

Keep scribing poet!

Peace,
UniverSouL
the
Essential

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