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$$RICH$$
09-10-2003, 12:27 AM
All night long
i heard
the distant thunder
breaker of the soul
like crashing tides

sculpting the horizon
deserted shorelines
under the burning flame
of cherry moon

now the misty ocean air
shivers as i rise
to the mask of breeze
clappin' windz with heat

behind me a city sleep
poundering progress
processions
of the northen cascade
and easten michinery

man has amounted to
nothing more then a
collaborations of
synthetic whisperz & moanz
in the breeze of darkness
as silent to a hush
of long betrayal
through autumn stormz
recite judas
the bedlam of man's table

the full body no longer
connect as the mind
of reversal play at witts
of false taste.

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2002 underground file

MzBlkAngel
09-10-2003, 10:26 PM
you this was deep
and i understnad..
the signs of betrayal
of a one thought friend....

$$RICH$$
09-11-2003, 12:08 AM
yes betrayal is the very stick in the back
when u looking that very one in the face
thankz for the read

suddenpassion
09-11-2003, 10:04 PM
wow, this was very powerful, deep..

$$RICH$$
09-11-2003, 10:57 PM
sudden it's the blast of betrayal of whom should be beside u
is the staber with the smile ......thankz sis.

gempis
09-11-2003, 11:08 PM
Whoa! Such imagery, and such a message. Oh, $$RICH$$. :bowdown:

$$RICH$$
09-11-2003, 11:17 PM
yes a first hand wittness of the very visional cast
of betrayal by the very one should have been wit me
is truely not ......false love , false hope !
thankz sistah gempis

$$RICH$$
09-14-2003, 02:49 PM
Reverse order of life & living !
ya heard

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