Speechless
in wonder
I listen to a voice
I think I could grow to love
forever
and gaze upon a face
I would love to see
with each mornings sunrise
and wonder
if I leave him
Speechless too.

that was too sweet.. made me say AWW at the end
smooth flow (snaps)

Short but SO sweet. It's so simple yet is says so much. I loved it.

this was beautifully pose'd
as u become speechless
from the maze of him
before day light he too
in the maze of ya voice
and speechless i hear u
the divine sound
the warm whispers
i hear it with amazment

i love this it say so much with few wordz

from the maze of him
i lost in his voice
fear i may never
see the day light
my sky again
is this love
or desperation?
i know not
so speechless
i remain
suspecting
it's not me that
leaves him
speechless

thanks for responding everybody!