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luvNwords
09-01-2003, 08:25 PM
deeply scarred by the one
you thought would never hurt you
will you let me be the one
who comforts and embraces you
trying to keep face
keeping your feelings all to yourself
will you let me be the one
you turn to when you have no one else

will you let me be the one
who arms you find warmth in
will you let me be the one
you depend on and place your trust in
can i just hold you throughout the night
as you sleep your way through
my mind is made but the decision is up to you

dont get me wrong
i'm not trying to come on to you
i just hate to see a sista cry
so let me help you thru
will you let me be the one
who shines a light on your pathway
will you let me be the one
who puts a smile on your face..............

true love
09-01-2003, 08:29 PM
Yes, you can truelly be the one. I loved this so deep and sweet. Keep it flowing

$$RICH$$
09-01-2003, 08:30 PM
nicely said and done

egyptianeyes
09-02-2003, 06:07 PM
Are you real ?

Randee
09-03-2003, 10:00 AM
Man, where were you last night at 4?

luvNwords
09-03-2003, 01:57 PM
thanks for the words!!

blaquebutterfli
09-03-2003, 02:06 PM
i'm with Randee - where you been hidin?
beautiful flow!

Bluewater
09-13-2003, 02:23 AM
my goodness
this was so on
oh so very nice
wonderful
Peace

sahara heart
10-16-2003, 09:28 AM
oh... how i have been waiting for those exact words! at least i am now comforted by the fact that someone somewhere thinks that way. love your flow. blessings!

gempis
10-16-2003, 06:14 PM
I hope she has it in her to try. This is pretty.

watzinaname
10-21-2003, 07:39 PM
Beautifully written. Reminds me that maybe one day I will find the one....

Ayaatee
10-21-2003, 09:57 PM
oh yes, this is just lovely!

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