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Hypnotize
05-13-2001, 03:18 AM
Okay reader,
imagine the bed after love has been made ...
and moments away from round 2 ( or 3 , or 4 ... )
Imagine the pulsating rhythm, the hum of a finely tuned engine,
Imagine a pleasantly bumpy ride...



and now, as promised ....................
_________________________________________


" Slippery When Wet " ___________________________

___________________________________________

Hugging the corners of your tightest curves,

tires squeeling, rubber burning

against racing friction.

Sweat IS the cheapest fuel, yet STILL flammable...
... when you think about it.



Hugging the corners of your Tightest curves,

holding on for Dear life

yet protected by the surrounding landscape.
( valleys,hills,streams opening from thick river banks )

DRIVING EXCITEMENT, shifting gears

- hoping the transmission doesn't slip

slide through puddles ,
slide towards home base,

Rest Stop, next exit ... 2 1/2 miles.



__________________________________________________ __________


note: After I read this at our poetry night, ( this is a yr. old at least )
this woman shouted out
" aww maaan, he only good for 2 minutes ??!!??
- I can't staand no two minute brutha's !!!! ) - LOL !!

she had it ALL wrong.


also check out : " Desire # 4 " ( freaky ish )
" People's choice award for best picture " ( lovelife )
" both hands on that *** " ( .....)

and " The long term effects of We'd "
________________________________________________pe acelove__

N2urSoul
05-13-2001, 12:34 PM
I Love What You Do For ME ~~and

....Like a ROCK....

Maybe these new car
commercials will
allow me to move into the
test driving role of this
type of hypnotic
automobile~? LOL

...then again lil' bro
glad to hear you're no
2 minute man! (not that I thought you were)...

Thanks for posting this... it's cool!

1 :heart:
from ya' bigsis

GA_Sunshyne
05-13-2001, 01:22 PM
(dammit!... i still haven't decided on a nick-name for you)

LOL... this piece was not at all funny... but i am laughing
at the sheer genius of your men-tal. You shift gears so
smooth-ly! it's really very intriguing...

*keepdoinwhatudo* :)

AlwaysLove.
SunShyne~

Hypnotize
05-14-2001, 08:46 PM
Thank you ever soo kindly ladies !!!


Not sayin' i'm a marathon man ( i don't brag )
but 2 min. - that would just be robbery !!! - LOL !

Destee
05-14-2001, 09:07 PM
Hi Hypnotize,

"Moved" means I moved your thread from the Poetry Category to the Polls Category. I didn't have the Poll Category created or the rule posted, saying that polls can't be put anywhere except in the Poll Category, before you put your poll up. So you did nothing wrong. I just wanna get things headed in the right direction before they get out of hand. So I moved your poll and N2urSoul's poll to this category.

I hope this makes sense. Basically saying that polls aren't allowed anywhere except in the Poll Category.

You are more than welcome to re-post your poetry in the Poetry Category, without the poll attached.

So many new features and I'm just feeling my way in regard to how they will all be managed. Please bear with me.

Thanks,

Destee

Abisha
12-06-2001, 07:05 PM
I must be a true freak:kiss:

$$RICH$$
04-15-2002, 08:33 PM
well now !!!!! so i hush before i crash!

Abisha
04-16-2002, 05:27 AM
I must admit it took me there, :lol: :love:

$$RICH$$
04-18-2002, 06:57 AM
well now ..........i got my eye on u now !!!

Abisha
04-18-2002, 11:34 PM
You keep me laughing, haha and I need that...Thanks Buddy!

$$RICH$$
04-19-2002, 02:38 AM
anytime my dear .......

Kebah
06-12-2002, 10:59 AM
Actually, my first thought was of someone speeding down a long dark road on bald tires.

Yep, a relationship between a car and it's owner can be intriging.

kebah

$$RICH$$
06-25-2002, 01:53 AM
it took off like a jet i agree Kebah

Kebah
06-27-2002, 02:35 AM
Originally posted by $$RICH$$
it took off like a jet i agree Kebah

:cool:

DestinyLove222
07-24-2003, 01:52 PM
I liked it. It made me hot!!!!

Sweet baby_face
08-01-2003, 12:57 PM
I was loving that. Yeah, it took me there

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