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msluciousb
08-13-2003, 01:08 AM
Softly the sound of the splashing waves, trees bow and birds sing as though they are calling your name.

The glow of your skin is radiant.
The touch from your lover is vibrant.
So much to your surprise, it's right
in your eyes.

And it whisper's your name...

Who is it whispering like butterflies
flapping their wings?
What is this exasperatingly euphoric
thing?

And it whisper's your name...

Tenderness is your sustenance
and understanding is your thirst
quenched. And security and warmth
are with you in each and every inch.

And it whisper's your name...

"When love calls you better answer.."
You have to catch your breath and let go. Give in to the thrill of not knowing.
And be off "On the wings of Love".

And it whisper's your name...

And you finally recognize the voice as your own. As you settle in the arms of the one that you love and every where they are feels like home....

LOVE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
BJS(c)2003

$$RICH$$
08-13-2003, 11:39 AM
whisper's your name !
in the arms of your love
sistah this was very beautiful flow
i was embrace inside every line

msluciousb
08-13-2003, 06:55 PM
It's pure fantasy, but it's my take on what finding love is like...Soon, I will achieve that level of trust and security with someone, but as for now, I will save my Passions for my Poetry!

BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!

$$RICH$$
08-13-2003, 09:36 PM
i hear you whispering
and poetry holds your heart
the passion for new love
maybe sooner then later
thank u for sharing this poetic ride
down poetry love lane

Jazz4u
08-15-2003, 08:25 PM
i feel all warm and fuzy inside
it's a beautiful piece all jokes aside
i've known this trust
didn't last
but hindsights reflects that if given another chance
i'd choose the same man
much respect j.

triniti424
08-29-2003, 12:44 AM
oh my sista y sho did do it with this one :) got me all sensitive and smushy lol ;)

msluciousb
09-03-2003, 09:35 PM
I can always count on you to read, relate and respond...the fundamentals for a well functioning Poetry forum in my humble opinion. I am home recovering from the last back surgery so I have not been able to sit up long, but for you...well you know!

Blessings On Ya House!

blaquebutterfli
09-04-2003, 09:32 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by msluciousb

You have to catch your breath and let go. Give in to the thrill of not knowing.

And it whisper's your name...

profoundly beautiful! now that's what I call poetry!:)
:bowdown:

egyptianeyes
09-04-2003, 01:57 PM
This is very beautiful...

msluciousb
09-04-2003, 04:44 PM
I so appreciate your taking the time to read and respond. It means a lot to me. I know most women can relate to this sort of poetry and I get a kick out of reading your responses. Please forgive me for not being on the board to read other's work, as I am recuperating from my final back surgery!
Blessings On Your Houses!

elayne.
09-09-2003, 07:14 PM
my sister!! :D

looks like i came right on time...
i am sooo glad i didn't miss this one!
per usual... you have done a beautiful
job. we need to kinnect, soon!!!!

alwayspeace&Love,
elayne.

msluciousb
09-11-2003, 08:36 PM
I am on it right now, dialing yo number my soror...
Love
Blessings on Ya House!

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