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Quinessential1
08-07-2003, 03:48 AM
Fear

You fear me because of the dynamic appeal and hypnotic delayed

effect that hidden truths hide with simple lies…averted eyes with

hurried glances leading to dreams without sleeping.

Deep are the ways of interaction that give way to the dull ache of

a touch that never quite satisfies thoughts of the perfect

encounter in a kindred yearning of a love bizarre…I am forced to

be left totally incomplete.

Yet the most complete thing that could ever happen between us

is complete denial…complete denial denying the most complete

union completing the most natural state a man and woman could

ever share.

Quiet love loudly calls out to me from lips moist with questions

that may only be asked while being kissed, tasted, and tested.

Remember me as you try to forget what made you forget to

remember what made you lose yourself inside that wonderful

what if that was me…what if time stood still watching a stolen

kiss taken while standing on a hill of desire…what if fields of

jasmine and clover concealed the true answer to a lovers

question that can never be asked…what if morning made love to

midnight and yesterday created a tomorrow that inspired a

blissful buffet set before lovers and disguised is as today?


Would you still fear me?


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$$RICH$$
08-07-2003, 08:34 AM
wow! this was very tyte
love how u did dis one

Bluewater
08-07-2003, 09:43 PM
this is wonderful
yes indeed
nice flow
Peace

Monetary
08-23-2003, 01:51 PM
Hell no I wouldn't fear you...bring it to papi, mami. :D

This is tight...

Nice...very nice.

You should come to voicechat and read it to your family. We'd love to hear it.

:toast: :D

angelicsage
08-19-2004, 04:08 PM
lol..Q1 is all man...


[QUOTE=Quinessential1]Fear

You fear me because of the dynamic appeal and hypnotic delayed

effect that hidden truths hide with simple lies…averted eyes with

hurried glances leading to dreams without sleeping.

uh...huh...

Deep are the ways of interaction that give way to the dull ache of

a touch that never quite satisfies thoughts of the perfect

encounter in a kindred yearning of a love bizarre…I am forced to

be left totally incomplete.

....hmmm

Yet the most complete thing that could ever happen between us

is complete denial…complete denial denying the most complete

union completing the most natural state a man and woman could

ever share.

an imperfect perfection...


Quiet love loudly calls out to me from lips moist with questions

that may only be asked while being kissed, tasted, and tested.

In silence...love screams

Remember me as you try to forget what made you forget to

remember what made you lose yourself inside that wonderful

what if that was me…

Unforgiving memories...


what if time stood still watching a stolen

kiss taken while standing on a hill of desire…what if fields of

jasmine and clover concealed the true answer to a lovers

question that can never be asked…what if morning made love to

midnight and yesterday created a tomorrow that inspired a

blissful buffet set before lovers and disguised is as today?

I always loved this ending...

Would you still fear me?

Fear is but a season...and one day, we just finally jump right in...


Always loved this poet! :spinstar: Maybe oneday I can get him to grace us with more!

watzinaname
08-20-2004, 05:48 AM
If the impossible became a reality, would we still fear what seems too good to be true. Perhaps, if we are scared of being hurt, but how else will we discover Eden? Reads like a love that anyone could only hope to discover...beautiful.

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