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Randee
07-31-2003, 03:49 PM
I saw him today.
My first thoughts . . . a$$hole . . . lover,
Did he think the same?

LovelyGoldenOne
07-31-2003, 07:55 PM
so few words...such a big question...i like...

$$RICH$$
08-01-2003, 12:17 AM
welcome u said a mouth full ...........

Bluewater
08-07-2003, 09:28 PM
hearing you clearly
welcome:wave: to the famliy
sunshine and blue sky

Randee
08-12-2003, 02:21 PM
will things ever change
will time stand still again while
the beauty unrests

SwtT
08-12-2003, 04:21 PM
rande....i never read hakiu...............but i sure am glad i read this....i still got those same feelings

Randee
08-12-2003, 04:47 PM
Thanks SwtT - I hardly ever write it, its so hard to convey a message in 17 syllables.

$$RICH$$
08-12-2003, 09:26 PM
they will change indeed
beauty is awaken now
time in the stilliness

very nice flowin, like how you pose these .

Randee
08-14-2003, 03:49 PM
the still of my womb
reminds me of life changes
taking part inside

$$RICH$$
08-15-2003, 05:44 PM
from the stillness it
allows the emotion to
become change slowly

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